Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Interesting art...the day of the dead festival is popular among moviemakers, and like Mardi Gras, I have managed to miss it....excellent very short ghost story...

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019

Thank you for the review and time.
All is revised with time,
God's Blessings

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A brief but impactful offering for the Ghost Story contest -- what a unique write you have penned! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) ;)

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thank you for the review and your time to read this poem. God Bless you

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Disagree with the poem. If you really know Jesus fear will never rule the show. Perfect love cast away fear. Best wishes to you in the contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Agreed and the point hopefully expressed.
God's Blessings to you.