What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Freedom Isn't Free"Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
3 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is a perfect acrtostic entry using the letters and making the aabb complete and making sense. Great rhyme and flow and keeping to the salute to those that give their all
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
This is a perfect acrtostic entry using the letters and making the aabb complete and making sense. Great rhyme and flow and keeping to the salute to those that give their all
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for all the stars and the kind review!
Comment from Michele Harber
This is a very strong, very moving and meaningful poem. You extended yourself in using a 15-letter series of words for your acrostic, and more so in making it rhyme, but you accomplished it all beautifully.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
This is a very strong, very moving and meaningful poem. You extended yourself in using a 15-letter series of words for your acrostic, and more so in making it rhyme, but you accomplished it all beautifully.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much! The stars and your review are greatly appreciated!
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It's my pleasure, and I fully agreed with the sentiments you expressed in your poem.
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Thank you! It really makes my day to see your comments.
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I'm very glad I could make you smile. Your comment had the same effect on me. :-)
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I really am glad!
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:-)
Comment from Tess Stavenski
Wow, your poem was truly inspiring. It makes me think of all those who sacrificed for our country's freedom and given their lives or their honor to serve. Thank you for your words in honoring those who have fallen.
Nicely written and thanks for sharing!
Tess
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
Wow, your poem was truly inspiring. It makes me think of all those who sacrificed for our country's freedom and given their lives or their honor to serve. Thank you for your words in honoring those who have fallen.
Nicely written and thanks for sharing!
Tess
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the six stars and the review! I am blown away!