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What Breaks My Heart

Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Freedom Isn't Free"
Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellent
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This is a perfect acrtostic entry using the letters and making the aabb complete and making sense. Great rhyme and flow and keeping to the salute to those that give their all

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much for all the stars and the kind review!
Comment from Michele Harber
Excellent
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This is a very strong, very moving and meaningful poem. You extended yourself in using a 15-letter series of words for your acrostic, and more so in making it rhyme, but you accomplished it all beautifully.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much! The stars and your review are greatly appreciated!
reply by Michele Harber on 11-Feb-2019
    It's my pleasure, and I fully agreed with the sentiments you expressed in your poem.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
    Thank you! It really makes my day to see your comments.
reply by Michele Harber on 11-Feb-2019
    I'm very glad I could make you smile. Your comment had the same effect on me. :-)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
    I really am glad!
reply by Michele Harber on 11-Feb-2019
    :-)
Comment from Tess Stavenski
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Wow, your poem was truly inspiring. It makes me think of all those who sacrificed for our country's freedom and given their lives or their honor to serve. Thank you for your words in honoring those who have fallen.

Nicely written and thanks for sharing!

Tess

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the six stars and the review! I am blown away!