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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
I need not to critique and give you any
helpful suggestions for your thirty syllable contest, just one thing look at the this line--You critque and the spelling of critique.
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Hello author
I need not to critique and give you any
helpful suggestions for your thirty syllable contest, just one thing look at the this line--You critque and the spelling of critique.
Gert
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you for reading. Ooops, you are so right, spelling in haste did not go to waste because of you. I appreciate this.
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Anon
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Smile Anon
You are welcome Gert
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Congratulations on your positive outlook! Too bad young people don't get it. They don't know what they are missing.
Peace,
Brigitte
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Thank Brigitte for saying
You wish that the younger people should have positive attitude about life instead of a negative out look on life. Gert
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you very much! I love being a reviewer. I hope to help others in the same kind and encouraging way. The secret to success! We all need your appreciative words.
All my best,
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much! I love being a reviewer. I hope to help others in the same kind and encouraging way. The secret to success! We all need your appreciative words.
All my best,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for reading and appreciating my sentiments. This came from the heart.
Peace and blessings,
Anon
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I could tell it was heartfelt. Thanks again!
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Comment from victor 66
I can't imagine this writing site without reviews. I also couldn't count the number of times that suggestions were offered that saved my bacon... as well my entry not being disqualified. You have good rhyme and rhythm that makes for a good read. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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I can't imagine this writing site without reviews. I also couldn't count the number of times that suggestions were offered that saved my bacon... as well my entry not being disqualified. You have good rhyme and rhythm that makes for a good read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for reading and appreciating my sentiments. This came from the heart.
Peace and blessings,
Anon
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You are welcome... and thanks for the "Peace and blessings".
Comment from Sugarray77
Well.... here is a critique. I enjoyed it.... But as we all know, I must give you 150 words. Now, with this topic that you have chosen.. one that concerns us all.. I find it hard to criticize poetry that answers all of the requirements, ( which yours did ~ 30 syllables) and has a subject that is relevant here on FS. I will say it again... I enjoyed it.
All the best,
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Well.... here is a critique. I enjoyed it.... But as we all know, I must give you 150 words. Now, with this topic that you have chosen.. one that concerns us all.. I find it hard to criticize poetry that answers all of the requirements, ( which yours did ~ 30 syllables) and has a subject that is relevant here on FS. I will say it again... I enjoyed it.
All the best,
Melissa
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for reading and appreciating my sentiments. This came from the heart. I loved your opening sentence, it made me chuckle.
Peace and blessings,
Anon
Comment from Earl Corp
This was a very creative way to use your 30 syllables. I'm not real enthralled with the artwork you chose to accompany the poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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This was a very creative way to use your 30 syllables. I'm not real enthralled with the artwork you chose to accompany the poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for reading and appreciating my sentiments. This came from the heart. I agree totally, I went back and changed the art; thanks to you!
Peace and blessings,
Anon