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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "weary sigh"All My Stuff
5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 addressing genius, Weary Sigh, has the correct set up and describes the action of casting pearls before swine. Did I get that right?
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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This 5-7-5 addressing genius, Weary Sigh, has the correct set up and describes the action of casting pearls before swine. Did I get that right?
Comment Written 31-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Yeah, I can just imagine a word weary ink stained genius getting off his feathered pillow to toss a few literary crumbs to the prose starved masses. Have a happy new year. Cheers, judester
Comment from djeckert
Nice, I can certainly relate to the sighs. ...lol. Hey your leading for my vote, so far , but many more to check out. Good luck, and well done. sigh
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Nice, I can certainly relate to the sighs. ...lol. Hey your leading for my vote, so far , but many more to check out. Good luck, and well done. sigh
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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I hope you come back. I validate parking and offer free water. Haha kidding. Thanks for the review, cheers, judester
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Wow! We are kindred souls, since I toss literary gems to you learning scribes. I will have to view your so-called "gems." Thanks for sharing your tiny words.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Wow! We are kindred souls, since I toss literary gems to you learning scribes. I will have to view your so-called "gems." Thanks for sharing your tiny words.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2018
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Haha I imagined a word~weary, self inflated poet getting up from his pillowed couch, to again entertain the hungry scribes, with some literary crumbs from his vast collection of witty prose. Certainly not me, I am still a newbie, Haha. Thanks for the review, cheers, judester
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Why weary? We welcome your gems of literary scribes! He he he, I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed your few words that spoke volumes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Why weary? We welcome your gems of literary scribes! He he he, I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed your few words that spoke volumes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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haha I imagined some ink~stained, pompus scribe pushing his inflated bulk from his desk to toss a few gems to the huddled wannabees. All in fun.. Cheers, j
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-I like the image in line one and
the use of "toss" in line two.
-I also like the last line with
"gathered scribes."
-A good entry; good luck
in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-I like the image in line one and
the use of "toss" in line two.
-I also like the last line with
"gathered scribes."
-A good entry; good luck
in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Thanks for the insightful review. All in good fun of course. Cheers, j
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You are very welcome.