But I thought
Broken promises14 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concise, moving piece effectively states a lesson that I suspect
most people learn by adulthood. Promises including words like "forever"
and "always" are frequently broken.
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Your concise, moving piece effectively states a lesson that I suspect
most people learn by adulthood. Promises including words like "forever"
and "always" are frequently broken.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A profound write and we promise forever and it never quite comes to fruition! I wish you luck with the contest, a poignant write, best wishes, love Dolly x
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A profound write and we promise forever and it never quite comes to fruition! I wish you luck with the contest, a poignant write, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
Comment from Miss Sherry
Brave philosophy - wisdom encapsulated in a small thought. This kind of thing happened to me. I thought forever was going to last always...instead it shriveled like a flower in the desert sand.
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Brave philosophy - wisdom encapsulated in a small thought. This kind of thing happened to me. I thought forever was going to last always...instead it shriveled like a flower in the desert sand.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks mind changes, thoughts changes in a moment, and it is true that sometimes something changes or ends so swiftly, quickly or fast; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks mind changes, thoughts changes in a moment, and it is true that sometimes something changes or ends so swiftly, quickly or fast; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
Comment from meeshu
this very short poem is full of melancholy.. You have done a fine job bring out this elusive emotion in your write, Helena..................meeshu
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this very short poem is full of melancholy.. You have done a fine job bring out this elusive emotion in your write, Helena..................meeshu
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
Comment from country ranch writer
No one can predict what the future holds and it can end in a blink of an eye leaving us with so many unanswered questions as to asking why?
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No one can predict what the future holds and it can end in a blink of an eye leaving us with so many unanswered questions as to asking why?
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Oh, this is so very good. You said so much in 9 words. Your title is very fitting. Your chosen illustration is perfect. Your poem makes me 'feel'.
Great writing! I wish you the very best in the contest!
C. Gale
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Oh, this is so very good. You said so much in 9 words. Your title is very fitting. Your chosen illustration is perfect. Your poem makes me 'feel'.
Great writing! I wish you the very best in the contest!
C. Gale
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Author your 9 word poem has a way to tell one that has been hurt by love that is sad, but it's darn good if you feel upset, get over that mood soon as you can.
Gert
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Hello Author your 9 word poem has a way to tell one that has been hurt by love that is sad, but it's darn good if you feel upset, get over that mood soon as you can.
Gert
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A very well-written and powerful statement under 10 words. So true that words spoken can be taken incorrectly. One-sided love talk is hurtful. :( I hope you do well in the contest. God luck.
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A very well-written and powerful statement under 10 words. So true that words spoken can be taken incorrectly. One-sided love talk is hurtful. :( I hope you do well in the contest. God luck.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem written with less than ten words and a real life time experience we all have from time to time. Forever promises do not always last longer than a few days or years.
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A very well-written poem written with less than ten words and a real life time experience we all have from time to time. Forever promises do not always last longer than a few days or years.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018