Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

This is hysterically funny! No in real life, I know, but the way you presented it in such a comical fashion is great! Well illustrated, too. Love this!
Your author notes got me laughing, too!
Great job :)

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Your should I call it a poem?
Hit The Road Jack...
Don't Ya Come Back.
Is really good and I read your authors note and what women were thinking and answering of "Cheatin' and drinkin'
Gert

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

Comment from OPALWAY3

Excellent

As comically as this is written, it has a realistic truthful meaning. The words are simple and very strong. The intensity of the thought of what can happen when you break the heart of someone who loves you. Reading with a big smile. Thanks for making me laugh!!!!!

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Writing a poem from the female perspective is creative and talented. Your poem rhymes, it makes sense, and is entertaining. The picture you chose to accompany the poem is very appropriate. Very good job.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018