Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Shirley, what a beautiful poem my sweet friend...
very well written Haiku poem...I love watching the moon shine off the waters...wish I had taken the picture...love your poem...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thanks Linda.
Lovely to hear from you.
Blessings
Shirley

reply by l.raven on 29-Nov-2018

your soooo welcome sweet girl...Blessings to you as well...love xxoo

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

This is most poetic, Shirley which I think we sometimes miss in the Japanese because we focus so intensely on the "rules". But this magical and yes also haiku as per instructions.

I wish you the best with the Contest Committee. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thanks Gloria,
Much appreciated.
Blessings
Shirley

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

beautiful!!!
you put a lot of time into this piece
and it shows
I thought the words were very smooth and the artwork
good storyline
thank you for sharing, I hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 11/28 2018

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Donka Kristeva

Excellent

Images are the hero of this haiku. Words are peaceful and inspiring ..... A stunning art work. Great entry for the contest. Best wishes

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thank you.