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"Miracles"

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List of Exceptional Poetry.

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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You have certainly penned very interesting if not surrealistically fantastical write here, Doc...really almost difficult to follow all of the pieces you've put together...Yvette:)

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks again Yvette.
    Ricky.
    PS.
    Did the Zombies get you yet?
Comment from DonandVicki
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I like the construction and feeling of this poem. But you have a small error in the title: you need a separation between the No and One. Looks good other than that.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
    Thanks Don and Vicki for your time and consideration.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Earl Corp
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I guess you're right, I hadn't thought of it in these terms how we're destroying earth and mankind ourselves. Calling on Jesus to help get us through this is a double edged sword. God helps those that help themselves, but there are too many not doing shit for themselves. Can't wait for the next installment.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
    Thanks Earl for your time and consideration.
    Doctor Ricky 1024