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Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles
I liked how you used onomatopoeia( repeated sounds of the cute drummer cat
Rata rata tat
Rat tat tat rata tat.
rhyming on the skins
Gert
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Smiles
I liked how you used onomatopoeia( repeated sounds of the cute drummer cat
Rata rata tat
Rat tat tat rata tat.
rhyming on the skins
Gert
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
Comment from mkflood
Now if you want to watch this cool cat bang the drums stop by YouTube.com and search MKFlood Presents and select the music video "Rolling in the Deep"..wink.. Thanks for selecting my work. It is an honor. Great job and thanks again... MKFlood.
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Now if you want to watch this cool cat bang the drums stop by YouTube.com and search MKFlood Presents and select the music video "Rolling in the Deep"..wink.. Thanks for selecting my work. It is an honor. Great job and thanks again... MKFlood.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
Comment from Liberty Justice
Six Stars 6******Very amusing and entertaining. The verses used making sounds a cat playing a drum is so cute and funny. Well written. Check my writingsout also. Liberty justice
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Six Stars 6******Very amusing and entertaining. The verses used making sounds a cat playing a drum is so cute and funny. Well written. Check my writingsout also. Liberty justice
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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HI THERE, LIB: As usual...sooo good to hear from you, my dear friend. Thank you for being my friend. thank you for viewing my work. Thank you for the stars. You are always sooo kind toward me...and I appreciate that very much. God bless you and yours, Lib. See ya at the writers' cross roads. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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Ronnie what is the writer's
crossroads.
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Hi there, Lib: You are my friend. You are a writer...so am I. It pleases me greatly that at times our paths cross. There...we meet each other and greet each other with good will. That makes me happy...when we meet and greet at the crossroads. *smile,* rhonnie69.
Comment from Pantygynt
As an exercise in onomatopoeia this is quite successful, if somewhat repetitive. Perhaps if your pussy could have been induced to hit the high hat, and tickle the symbol occasionally it would have added some syncopation and more interest to this bit of fun.
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As an exercise in onomatopoeia this is quite successful, if somewhat repetitive. Perhaps if your pussy could have been induced to hit the high hat, and tickle the symbol occasionally it would have added some syncopation and more interest to this bit of fun.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
Comment from meeshu
when I write things like this I call them B-Sides. they fill your portfolio and later I look again and say, 'I really like this one.' even Jim Morrison wrote, "Love Street" I think it's great, rhonnie.....................meeshu
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when I write things like this I call them B-Sides. they fill your portfolio and later I look again and say, 'I really like this one.' even Jim Morrison wrote, "Love Street" I think it's great, rhonnie.....................meeshu
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018