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Comment from nomi338
This wallaby has just got to be the first animal in history who has a desire to be, something more that what it was born to be. In other words it is a true wanna be. Since it is quite a sight to see, it does not need to be anything more than what it was born to be.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
This wallaby has just got to be the first animal in history who has a desire to be, something more that what it was born to be. In other words it is a true wanna be. Since it is quite a sight to see, it does not need to be anything more than what it was born to be.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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I see
Comment from Gloria ....
Now that is the cutest little animal I've seen in about five minutes, and what a terrific poem to go with it. I suspect they kick pretty good though, so it's admiration from a distance.
Great job, Bill. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
Now that is the cutest little animal I've seen in about five minutes, and what a terrific poem to go with it. I suspect they kick pretty good though, so it's admiration from a distance.
Great job, Bill. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, you made me smile Bill with this write! A geat play on words and those kangaroos look so cute and move so fast too! Best wishes, Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
He he he, you made me smile Bill with this write! A geat play on words and those kangaroos look so cute and move so fast too! Best wishes, Love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Dollyj
Comment from lyenochka
Fun one, Bill! I like all the sounds in this poem - the "oo" and the "ee" rhymes and the alliteration of 'w's. Good choice of animal - cute and a little less well known.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
Fun one, Bill! I like all the sounds in this poem - the "oo" and the "ee" rhymes and the alliteration of 'w's. Good choice of animal - cute and a little less well known.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
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Thanks, lyenochka.
Comment from Boogienights
They look like kangaroos! This is really cute, but I'm pondering now...what's the difference between the two? Google, here I come! Interesting choice of animal, I'm excited to see where this goes.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
They look like kangaroos! This is really cute, but I'm pondering now...what's the difference between the two? Google, here I come! Interesting choice of animal, I'm excited to see where this goes.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
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Thanks, BN. I think the wallaby is smaller and can be a pet.
Comment from Sally Law
Adorable. My granddaughter will love this photo as well. This is probably the best close-up picture of a wallaby I've ever seen. (Of course, I have to magnify everything I read by 100 percent.) It went well with your Aussie poetry.
All the best,
Sally
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
Adorable. My granddaughter will love this photo as well. This is probably the best close-up picture of a wallaby I've ever seen. (Of course, I have to magnify everything I read by 100 percent.) It went well with your Aussie poetry.
All the best,
Sally
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Sally.
Comment from Teri7
I think that these are so cute and adorable. You used such cute words in the poem and very lovely imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings Teri
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
I think that these are so cute and adorable. You used such cute words in the poem and very lovely imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings Teri
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Tina Crute
This is so darn cute! I can see kids at school saying this! You know how they like to say poo....You composed it very cleverly! Great poem! We don't see enough funny on here, so thanks!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
This is so darn cute! I can see kids at school saying this! You know how they like to say poo....You composed it very cleverly! Great poem! We don't see enough funny on here, so thanks!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Tina.
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Welcome!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, now there's an interesting approach...makes the reader really look forward to the format of the rest of the wallabies...could prove to be interesting!! :) :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
Well, now there's an interesting approach...makes the reader really look forward to the format of the rest of the wallabies...could prove to be interesting!! :) :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
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Someone requested this guy. I think they?re from Australia.