Funny Honey
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Piggy's Bar."A Witty Ditty Anthology
2 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is very funny. There was a point, I can't remember quite where, but I good a sense of a foreshadowing about just what the fight might be. Somehow you worked that in, I don't know if it was subliminally or not, but this was great. The imagery was good too. Quite shortly into the story, I was pretty sure there was no fight on TV. This will draw the reader in to, to puzzle it out. What fun. Well written.
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This is very funny. There was a point, I can't remember quite where, but I good a sense of a foreshadowing about just what the fight might be. Somehow you worked that in, I don't know if it was subliminally or not, but this was great. The imagery was good too. Quite shortly into the story, I was pretty sure there was no fight on TV. This will draw the reader in to, to puzzle it out. What fun. Well written.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello rhonnie69
You come up jokes with a punch line that I didn't expect. and your caption to your posting smiles said (Drinks Are On The House.)
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Hello rhonnie69
You come up jokes with a punch line that I didn't expect. and your caption to your posting smiles said (Drinks Are On The House.)
Gert
Comment Written 22-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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HELLO GERT: Thank you for your review. I always try to come up with a, "PUNCH LINE," that my reader didn't see coming. I've imagined that that helps me make my reader laugh...and say... "ha ha ha...I should have known...but I didn't. This is funny. Thank you, Gert. Cordially: Your friend. rhonnie69.