Comment from
Barb Hensongispsaca
A very nice free verse based on the original love story of all times. Nicely done in keeping the content and displaying a true love content. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
Thank you so much for the kind review and the wonderful stars.
Comment from
Lady Jane
Interesting twist on the beginning creation love story. Rhyme was good, pace and voice were steady, and presentation was good. I found no errors to note. Nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
Thank you. I am both honored and humbled by the rating as well as the review.
Comment from
Jannypan (Jan)
This is a nice contest entry, fm. You rhyme scheme is good and maintained well. Your words flow smoothly. I believe this could be current for many. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
Thank you. I am blessed by the rating and your kind review.