Synchronized
An Essence Poem12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This essence poem, Mesmerized, has both the internal and end rhyme, and six-syllables-per-line requirements. The image of floating butterflies preparing to bump uglies is divine (except for my crass comment).
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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This essence poem, Mesmerized, has both the internal and end rhyme, and six-syllables-per-line requirements. The image of floating butterflies preparing to bump uglies is divine (except for my crass comment).
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Hey, it?s natured way. Who are we to judge??? Thank you for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Excellent Essence Poem with beautiful artwork to support it. I do not see anything that needs to be corrected. Thank you for writing and sharing, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Excellent Essence Poem with beautiful artwork to support it. I do not see anything that needs to be corrected. Thank you for writing and sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Many thanks for your supportive and encouraging review!
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My pleasure
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-You met all of the prompt requirements.
-The imagery in line one is very good;
I like the comparison of the
butterflies to dancers.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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-Very nice image.
-You met all of the prompt requirements.
-The imagery in line one is very good;
I like the comparison of the
butterflies to dancers.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts and insights.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. It seems the criteria of it was met. I like the art you paired your well-chosen words with. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. It seems the criteria of it was met. I like the art you paired your well-chosen words with. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your encouraging comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written essence poem about butterflies that synchronize in mid air dancing like professionals and getting mesmerize all eyes that look at them there.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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A very well-written essence poem about butterflies that synchronize in mid air dancing like professionals and getting mesmerize all eyes that look at them there.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your kind comments.
Comment from Gloria ....
So delicate and so pretty. The artwork is a delight and the matching essence poem, of equal elegance.
Very nicely done, author and I wish you much luck in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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So delicate and so pretty. The artwork is a delight and the matching essence poem, of equal elegance.
Very nicely done, author and I wish you much luck in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you, Gloria, for the positive and insightful review.
Comment from poesyapprentice
Interesting initial rhyme. Seems like the prompt rules were followed. The poem had lovely imagery which I enjoyed very much. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Interesting initial rhyme. Seems like the prompt rules were followed. The poem had lovely imagery which I enjoyed very much. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the positive and insightful review.
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I wrote a poem which used beginning rhymes as well and was told by a reviewer that it doesn't count as internal rhymes. I took the term internal to mean within the line itself which beginning rhymes are. Hopefully it doesn't hurt us in the vote.
Comment from meeshu
a very good essence poem full of life and feeling. the nature of nature is nicely displayed in your words. good luck in the contest..
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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a very good essence poem full of life and feeling. the nature of nature is nicely displayed in your words. good luck in the contest..
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2018
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Thank you for the positive and insightful review.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Butterflies are so beautiful anyway but when 2 butterflies synchronize in a beautiful little dance together right before your eyes it's such a delightful display of Elegance. Your poem meet the requirements of words and syllables and the picture accommodates your poem
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Butterflies are so beautiful anyway but when 2 butterflies synchronize in a beautiful little dance together right before your eyes it's such a delightful display of Elegance. Your poem meet the requirements of words and syllables and the picture accommodates your poem
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Thank you for stopping by to read my essence poem on butterflies!
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My pleasure
Comment from Kelly Grim
Very nicely done! This was a difficult one to rhyme but you did it, and you did it well! All the syllables are there. A unique subject, fantastic word choice, great title, beautiful pic! I love just about everything! This will no doubt be a contender to win this contest! I have two 6-stars left and I think I want to give you one of them :)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Very nicely done! This was a difficult one to rhyme but you did it, and you did it well! All the syllables are there. A unique subject, fantastic word choice, great title, beautiful pic! I love just about everything! This will no doubt be a contender to win this contest! I have two 6-stars left and I think I want to give you one of them :)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Thank you for stopping by to read my essence poem on butterflies! And for the generous stars! It is much appreciated.
