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Comment from Marvin Calloway
What you've written is interesting, but the reader has no hint as to the genre. With just a little more info you could grab them. I think they'll need more certainty. 5 *
Marv
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What you've written is interesting, but the reader has no hint as to the genre. With just a little more info you could grab them. I think they'll need more certainty. 5 *
Marv
Comment Written 14-Sep-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written teaser to read more about this introduction about a fatal airplane crash and tge evidence of where the body can be found like a message from beyond the grave.
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A very well-written teaser to read more about this introduction about a fatal airplane crash and tge evidence of where the body can be found like a message from beyond the grave.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a recording, there was no fair chance of survival for all four sides could endow death to the plane boarder, but it was a mysterious saving for dead people tell no tales; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks a recording, there was no fair chance of survival for all four sides could endow death to the plane boarder, but it was a mysterious saving for dead people tell no tales; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
Comment from RodG
Wow! Anyone afraid of flying is going to be grabbed by this short-short. I like how the Speaker gets our attention focused on the wings, the raft, and then the recorded message. Rod
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Wow! Anyone afraid of flying is going to be grabbed by this short-short. I like how the Speaker gets our attention focused on the wings, the raft, and then the recorded message. Rod
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018