Reviews from

Worlds

Viewing comments for Chapter 264 "Komodo Dragon World 6"
Animal poetry and short stories

8 total reviews 
Comment from frogbook
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Haha-now that is an evil, yet sexy looking dragon, confirmed by your words. And surely this is good advice and I suspect everyone will take your advice!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
    Thanks, FB. He?s a charmer.
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Um. But he's green. Are you really sure that he's a komodo dragon and not an oversized gecko? A distant relative of the Geico advertisement dude? Cute one, Bill.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka.
Comment from damommy
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hahahaha. Thanks for the tip but I don't think I'll be kissing any komodo dragons however his breath smells. I suppose you're addressing this to lady komodo dragons.

What an amusing poem.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
    I don't know. This guy looks ready for anything.
Comment from Teri7
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I am so thankful I do not have one of those Komodo dragons like this or real! lol You used great words and neat imagery with the art work picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this, I saw no spam or errors. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
    Thanks, Teri
reply by Teri7 on 21-Aug-2018
    you are so welcome!
Comment from Ginnygray
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Komodo, what a handsome fellow you are and you are dressed with such panache! I will beware of your breath, however, for I have been forewarned that it is excruciatingly painful to bear! Great poem!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
    Thanks, Ginny.
Comment from nomi338
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Looks that kill and a breath that will. A deadly combination. I have known people like this, good lookers but horrible hygiene. I even knew a woman that had a killer body but needed to pay much more attention to her teeth. When she opened her mouth to speak plants died and paint peeled from the wall.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
    ...and then I married her.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Bill, we finally find out what you really look like. I had my suspicions you were a Gorn. Tread lightly or I will send Captain Jame T Kirk to see you again.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
    He lucked out with that log cannon.
Comment from heavenempress
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

this is a perfect piece of work. keep it up!I enjoyed it especially how simple it flowed and made sense in few words. keep it up! you have a good english command. i think it fit too for children's and humor poetry

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
    Thanks, HE