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8 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Haha-now that is an evil, yet sexy looking dragon, confirmed by your words. And surely this is good advice and I suspect everyone will take your advice!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
Haha-now that is an evil, yet sexy looking dragon, confirmed by your words. And surely this is good advice and I suspect everyone will take your advice!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Thanks, FB. He?s a charmer.
Comment from lyenochka
Um. But he's green. Are you really sure that he's a komodo dragon and not an oversized gecko? A distant relative of the Geico advertisement dude? Cute one, Bill.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
Um. But he's green. Are you really sure that he's a komodo dragon and not an oversized gecko? A distant relative of the Geico advertisement dude? Cute one, Bill.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thanks, lyenochka.
Comment from damommy
Hahahaha. Thanks for the tip but I don't think I'll be kissing any komodo dragons however his breath smells. I suppose you're addressing this to lady komodo dragons.
What an amusing poem.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
Hahahaha. Thanks for the tip but I don't think I'll be kissing any komodo dragons however his breath smells. I suppose you're addressing this to lady komodo dragons.
What an amusing poem.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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I don't know. This guy looks ready for anything.
Comment from Teri7
I am so thankful I do not have one of those Komodo dragons like this or real! lol You used great words and neat imagery with the art work picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this, I saw no spam or errors. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
I am so thankful I do not have one of those Komodo dragons like this or real! lol You used great words and neat imagery with the art work picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this, I saw no spam or errors. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Teri
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you are so welcome!
Comment from Ginnygray
Komodo, what a handsome fellow you are and you are dressed with such panache! I will beware of your breath, however, for I have been forewarned that it is excruciatingly painful to bear! Great poem!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
Komodo, what a handsome fellow you are and you are dressed with such panache! I will beware of your breath, however, for I have been forewarned that it is excruciatingly painful to bear! Great poem!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Ginny.
Comment from nomi338
Looks that kill and a breath that will. A deadly combination. I have known people like this, good lookers but horrible hygiene. I even knew a woman that had a killer body but needed to pay much more attention to her teeth. When she opened her mouth to speak plants died and paint peeled from the wall.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
Looks that kill and a breath that will. A deadly combination. I have known people like this, good lookers but horrible hygiene. I even knew a woman that had a killer body but needed to pay much more attention to her teeth. When she opened her mouth to speak plants died and paint peeled from the wall.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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...and then I married her.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Bill, we finally find out what you really look like. I had my suspicions you were a Gorn. Tread lightly or I will send Captain Jame T Kirk to see you again.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
Bill, we finally find out what you really look like. I had my suspicions you were a Gorn. Tread lightly or I will send Captain Jame T Kirk to see you again.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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He lucked out with that log cannon.
Comment from heavenempress
this is a perfect piece of work. keep it up!I enjoyed it especially how simple it flowed and made sense in few words. keep it up! you have a good english command. i think it fit too for children's and humor poetry
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
this is a perfect piece of work. keep it up!I enjoyed it especially how simple it flowed and made sense in few words. keep it up! you have a good english command. i think it fit too for children's and humor poetry
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thanks, HE