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Comment from kiwisteveh
An amusing little poem with lovely punchline.
A couple of fixes you might want to make... No need for speech marks in the first five lines of your poem - only needed around the words actually spoken - first by the shopkeeper and then in the final line by the boy.
Spelling: nickle --> nickel
Steve
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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An amusing little poem with lovely punchline.
A couple of fixes you might want to make... No need for speech marks in the first five lines of your poem - only needed around the words actually spoken - first by the shopkeeper and then in the final line by the boy.
Spelling: nickle --> nickel
Steve
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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HELLO KIWISTEVEH: Thank You for your helpful and encouraging review. I edited this posting according to your suggestions.
After I did I found that it made it better. I'm glad that you helped me with this. Thank you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this is hilarious Rhonnie! Inventive and fun. I love the 'starvin Marvin' Cockney rhyming slang too. You entertained me here Rhonnie, love Dolly x
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He he he, this is hilarious Rhonnie! Inventive and fun. I love the 'starvin Marvin' Cockney rhyming slang too. You entertained me here Rhonnie, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018