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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "IHOP... At The Break Of Dawn."A Witty Ditty Anthology
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello rhonnie69
I like your humor of the early birds to take a tip from Earl E. Bird
How to catch a worm. BY
Watching Bobbin' Robin.
The only thing I noticed robins aren't blue they are brown You pix look like blue birds.
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Hello rhonnie69
I like your humor of the early birds to take a tip from Earl E. Bird
How to catch a worm. BY
Watching Bobbin' Robin.
The only thing I noticed robins aren't blue they are brown You pix look like blue birds.
Gert
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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HELLO GERT: As usual, you are helpfully right. I edited my work, in observation of your proofreading comments. I've changed it to; "Redbreast bobbin'." I have deleted robin. Thank you, my pen-pal fan. You've helped me to make my writing better, again. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You are welcome rhonnie69
I Thank you for saying--
how I edited your work, in observation of my proofreading comments.
Gert
Comment from Barbara Hurwitz
Ronnie 69, Excellent flash fiction. The is humorous and with great pictures and title. In so few words you captured the scene and the readers. My only suggestion is to maybe use a question mark after How to catch a worm. Great job!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Ronnie 69, Excellent flash fiction. The is humorous and with great pictures and title. In so few words you captured the scene and the readers. My only suggestion is to maybe use a question mark after How to catch a worm. Great job!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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HELLO BARBARA: Thank you for the helpful, encouraging review. Thank you for the stars. I appreciate them. I've taken your advise, and placed a, question mark where you suggested that I place it; all the better for my effort. Thank you, Barbara. Cordially: rhonnie69.