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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Which?"Eclectic style
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job, Bucketlist, with your contest entry. Your 3 lines tell a true story that many ignore.
I believe this contest is for one verse only although the rules do not state that. I know that is your choice. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Good job, Bucketlist, with your contest entry. Your 3 lines tell a true story that many ignore.
I believe this contest is for one verse only although the rules do not state that. I know that is your choice. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I?m glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for your good luck wishes. I write more to express myself , and positive reviews are my prize!
Hugs, Trisha
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I?m glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for your good luck wishes. I write more to express myself , and positive reviews are my prize!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Trisha,
Wouldn't it be wonderful if people came with labels like food? On some folks, it would tell us that they are full of poisons and caustic elements that would hurt us, while others would tell of a beautiful heart and enormous love.
Thank you for sharing your three-line poem and I wish you luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Hi, Trisha,
Wouldn't it be wonderful if people came with labels like food? On some folks, it would tell us that they are full of poisons and caustic elements that would hurt us, while others would tell of a beautiful heart and enormous love.
Thank you for sharing your three-line poem and I wish you luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Yes it would!
Comment from Robbie Yates
Ooh - clever piece, referencing the picture in your poem! I enjoyed reading this, and thinking about the question you have posed. What an interesting approach!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Ooh - clever piece, referencing the picture in your poem! I enjoyed reading this, and thinking about the question you have posed. What an interesting approach!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Too many people are in relationships which lack something . Thanks for your kind review. I?m glad I made you think!,,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Adam Ihnken
I'm torn, because on the one hand, the poem is lovely, but without the picture, it loses it's meaning. In this way you have extended the needed amount of words.
The poem itself is rendered meaningless without the words in the picture and no picture without the words would provide the context needed.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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I'm torn, because on the one hand, the poem is lovely, but without the picture, it loses it's meaning. In this way you have extended the needed amount of words.
The poem itself is rendered meaningless without the words in the picture and no picture without the words would provide the context needed.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Your partner?s your choice
Live with, lover, meant to be
Perfection?s all three
Thanks for your 2 Star review
Comment from Michele Harber
I was lucky enough to find someone who met all three criteria so, yes, I agree with you totally. The poem is romantic and hopeful, and fit the parameters of the three-line poetry contest and, as an added bonus, it rhymed. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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I was lucky enough to find someone who met all three criteria so, yes, I agree with you totally. The poem is romantic and hopeful, and fit the parameters of the three-line poetry contest and, as an added bonus, it rhymed. Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Thanks so much for a kind supportive review.
Congratulations by the way - you have a special relationship
Hugs, Trisha
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Thank you. I truly do, and I hope you do or will ls well.
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It?s too late for me, but I?m happy for you.
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Hopefully it's never too late - but thank you.
Comment from Lady Jane
Ok, so you're saying a lover needs to be someone we love, someone we're willing to settle with, and someone we're meant for? Did I read that correctly, bucket? Now that's a whole heap of insight and questioning you've forced upon me today after traveling for a week, LOL. Three simple lines require so much reflection. Well done, again. I like it. Simple to understand, presented well, and thought provoking to boot. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Janelle
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Ok, so you're saying a lover needs to be someone we love, someone we're willing to settle with, and someone we're meant for? Did I read that correctly, bucket? Now that's a whole heap of insight and questioning you've forced upon me today after traveling for a week, LOL. Three simple lines require so much reflection. Well done, again. I like it. Simple to understand, presented well, and thought provoking to boot. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Yes, 3 for 1 special person! I?d rather be living with a lover, the one who?s meant for me. Thanks for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You truly nailed it with this one. It is perfect even though I do believe there will only be two out of three. All three would make for a marriage made in heaven.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018
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You truly nailed it with this one. It is perfect even though I do believe there will only be two out of three. All three would make for a marriage made in heaven.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018
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So let?s go with love and meant to be! Settle can stay at home LOL Thank you for your kind review
Hugs
Comment from humpwhistle
I'm not the contest police, but I wonder if this truly qualifies as a 3-line poem.
You refer to words in the image, therefore the poem doesn't work without them.
One man's opinion.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018
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I'm not the contest police, but I wonder if this truly qualifies as a 3-line poem.
You refer to words in the image, therefore the poem doesn't work without them.
One man's opinion.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018
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I?ve sought advice From the powers that be. Thanks for your review
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderfully idealistic statement in only three lines -- certainly should be the goal in all cases......but, then again, if it were how it worked all the time, we poets and authors might not have near enough material to work with, yes? :) :) :)
Well done and good luck in the contest? :) :)
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018
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What a wonderfully idealistic statement in only three lines -- certainly should be the goal in all cases......but, then again, if it were how it worked all the time, we poets and authors might not have near enough material to work with, yes? :) :) :)
Well done and good luck in the contest? :) :)
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018
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Yes, to each action, there?s always a reaction. Idealistic poem, yet not so frequent. I think there?s little danger of poet famin because then we?d have the feast about the yummy taste of bliss! Thanks so much for your humorous review
Hugs, Trisha