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Comment from frogbook
Hahaha. Very clever word play here and a great picture -reminiscent of an adult version of the Coppertone girl. All grown up now with a lobster instead of a dog!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Hahaha. Very clever word play here and a great picture -reminiscent of an adult version of the Coppertone girl. All grown up now with a lobster instead of a dog!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thanks, FB
Comment from Pamusart
This is so cute, Bill. I think I have heard of bearded clams but am not sure. Heard it somewhere, I think. I never order lobster because I know they will kill one for me. The faster they kill them the more they will fish for and the more that will die. But this is very cute. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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This is so cute, Bill. I think I have heard of bearded clams but am not sure. Heard it somewhere, I think. I never order lobster because I know they will kill one for me. The faster they kill them the more they will fish for and the more that will die. But this is very cute. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Pam, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job on your poem, Bill. The picture + your words leave nothing to the imagination. Your lobster stories offer many ideas to readers. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Good job on your poem, Bill. The picture + your words leave nothing to the imagination. Your lobster stories offer many ideas to readers. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun and amusing write Bill and you made me laugh, an inventive write full of cheeky raunchy humour, but like Blackpool Postcards! He he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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A fun and amusing write Bill and you made me laugh, an inventive write full of cheeky raunchy humour, but like Blackpool Postcards! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Ginnygray
Wow Bill, the lobster world is getting "x" rated or at least "r". ð???. So the lobster is getting fresh with the waitress and yearns for one last request, which is a tumble with the waitress!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Wow Bill, the lobster world is getting "x" rated or at least "r". ð???. So the lobster is getting fresh with the waitress and yearns for one last request, which is a tumble with the waitress!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Lobsters! You can?t take them anywhere nice.
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LOL.
Comment from AnnieDawn
Very funny play on words. I did have to chuckle at this one. Clever humor and I usually do not like off color poetry. Well done. Good choice of photography to compliment. Which came first? The poem or the pic?
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Very funny play on words. I did have to chuckle at this one. Clever humor and I usually do not like off color poetry. Well done. Good choice of photography to compliment. Which came first? The poem or the pic?
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Hi Annie. I was looking for some lobster inspiration and came across this picture. Thought I'd take a chance on it. Thanks for giving it a look. Bill