Funny Honey
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Hey!! Hey, Wendy!!"A Witty Ditty Anthology
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Comment from Elizabeth Brown
Very amusing and novel poem. Made me smile, typical of children, especially brother and sister, and I think all children would appreciate this. Good picture too. Best wishes, Elizabeth.
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Very amusing and novel poem. Made me smile, typical of children, especially brother and sister, and I think all children would appreciate this. Good picture too. Best wishes, Elizabeth.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from L E Scott
I feel like this would flow better if you took out the names of the people talking and just left it like dialog. Interesting and cute little children's conversation. Nice ending.
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I feel like this would flow better if you took out the names of the people talking and just left it like dialog. Interesting and cute little children's conversation. Nice ending.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018