Funny Honey
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Comment from Harold Gardner
Good photo to tie in dialogue
I liked the exchange back and forth between Jokie and Mike
Good ending seeing that Mike didn't know or hear of secret spy
In first line would like it better it be whole world rather than whole wide world, but that is just me. Good job!
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Good photo to tie in dialogue
I liked the exchange back and forth between Jokie and Mike
Good ending seeing that Mike didn't know or hear of secret spy
In first line would like it better it be whole world rather than whole wide world, but that is just me. Good job!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
Comment from Kathleen S.
Funny.. Shady indeed.. Great joke and wow, one I wouldn't have thought of. Fun poem. You make good use of your words, and a story written in there somewhere I am positive about.
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Funny.. Shady indeed.. Great joke and wow, one I wouldn't have thought of. Fun poem. You make good use of your words, and a story written in there somewhere I am positive about.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018