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Sections of Life

3 cubed contest entry

8 total reviews 
Comment from rama devi
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I love the scope of this and the ironic brevity used to convey it. Great rhyme and rhythm. Bravo. A 'distilled' delivery of AHA along the life-thread-theme. Also, nice thread of S sounds and soft C too. Sounds good read aloud. A fine presentation. Hope this did well in the contest (or will...if it is not over).

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
    Dear rama davi, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove
reply by rama devi on 02-Aug-2018
    :-)))
Comment from Bill Schott
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This three-cubed poem, Sections of Life, follows the guidelines for the contest and hold up the three phases of life as child, adult, and been-there-done-that.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018
    Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and rating.
Comment from William Ross
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Very good nicely done on this, fits the prompt perfect on count and tells of three stages of life that are right on. Good luck on this and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Dear William, Thank you for your comments and rating.
Comment from rspoet
Excellent
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This is an excellent three cubed poem and entry for the contest.
Written exactly to the rules with the addition of the three stages of life.
You even got plenty of rhymes in there.
Excellent picture to match
Good luck in the contest
RS





 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Dear rspoet, Thank you for your comments, rating and good luck wishes.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Such a wonderful interpretation of life through your chosen image as well as through the use of the oddly prescribed requirements for the contest -- like your rhyme scheme as well -- great job!

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) :)

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Dear Y.M. Thank you again for your comments and rating. Thanks for wishing me good luck.
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

Very nice piece. All requirements present and correct, which is always nice. Good tight write. Nice theme.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Dear giraffmang, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
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What a stunning photo paired with an equally well written piece of poetry. This is a very special story you are telling in so few words. You should go far with this!

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Dear Shauna, Thank you for your comments and rating.
Comment from Henry King
Exceptional
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What an outstanding piece of writing. Coupled with a picture of a least three generations of Phillipinas the poem and picture this poet said it all. No need for one of the other, they both stand on their own merit. This piece of art should be the contest winner in the three cubed contest. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
    Dear Henry, Thank you for your comments and six stars.
reply by Henry King on 26-Jul-2018
    You are welcome.