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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Lenticular Clouds"Eclectic style
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A great descriptive write with perfect artwork to match Trisha, and geat Haiku entry for the contest and I wish you luck, you painted a perfect painting of the clouds here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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A great descriptive write with perfect artwork to match Trisha, and geat Haiku entry for the contest and I wish you luck, you painted a perfect painting of the clouds here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Wow! Thanks so much, Dolly. I never realized the beautiful variations of clouds offered by nature. I appreciate your great review, and of course, the ? heavenly? six stars,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
What I know about haikus you could put on the head of a pin. This is lovely and I think it meets requirements.
You've certainly give a great description of this phenomenon. I've never seen anything like it. Thank you for showing this.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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What I know about haikus you could put on the head of a pin. This is lovely and I think it meets requirements.
You've certainly give a great description of this phenomenon. I've never seen anything like it. Thank you for showing this.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Haiku has 3 lines, tradionally
5 syllables,
7 syllables
5 syllables
It does not have to rhyme
Often uses nature as the subject, writing should be able to ?stand alone? and create an image as if there was no picture. Hope this helps. Thanks for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Gloria ....
That is a fascinating cloud formation isn't it? But seeing is believing and your fine haiku illustrates the geometry involved in the fluffy white layers.
Excellent and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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That is a fascinating cloud formation isn't it? But seeing is believing and your fine haiku illustrates the geometry involved in the fluffy white layers.
Excellent and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from kahpot
Nature certainly can display some beautiful art at times and your excellent Haiku has captured this photo beautifully, very well done and best wishes in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Nature certainly can display some beautiful art at times and your excellent Haiku has captured this photo beautifully, very well done and best wishes in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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FS has given me more of a reason to enjoy nature by searching for subjects to post. I never realized the variety of cloud formation before. Thank you kahpot for reviewing so kindly, and I?m very glad you enjoyed my choice.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
The picture is interesting but looks fake. I have heard of these clouds. Good topic for a haiku. I would not use capital letters & you have 19 syllables. I believe the max number is 17. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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The picture is interesting but looks fake. I have heard of these clouds. Good topic for a haiku. I would not use capital letters & you have 19 syllables. I believe the max number is 17. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Corrected , thanks for your helpful review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Robbie Yates
Ooh - fascinating picture and great haiku. "Nature's high altitude art" is a great line. Thanks for sharing another brilliant poem, and good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Ooh - fascinating picture and great haiku. "Nature's high altitude art" is a great line. Thanks for sharing another brilliant poem, and good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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That?s extremely kind of you Robbie, I am really honored by your compliments. Thank you for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha