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Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Reflections"Eclectic style
5 total reviews
Comment from damommy
Wow! Very difficult words to rhyme and still make sense, but you did it so well.
Your message is so important. We all should take the time to 'pull ourselves together.'
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Wow! Very difficult words to rhyme and still make sense, but you did it so well.
Your message is so important. We all should take the time to 'pull ourselves together.'
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much, I had the lowest review 2 star ever! The reviewer could not make sense of the poem. review was very welcome!
Hugs, Trisha
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Well, that was tacky. It happens to us all. Don't let it get you down.
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Thanks, I will let it go
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Good for you. If someone keeps bothering you or giving rotten reviews, you can report them. I haven't had to do that, but some people have.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Nice monorhyme and very cleverly thought out. Flow is good and rhyme is excellent. I will admit, I had to look up a few of these for meaning, but spot on
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Nice monorhyme and very cleverly thought out. Flow is good and rhyme is excellent. I will admit, I had to look up a few of these for meaning, but spot on
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Thank you Barb, your review compliments are very much appreciated.hugs
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Thank you Barb, your review compliments are very much appreciated.hugs
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Trisha,
Wow. All those 'tion' words. The poem took me a bit to read and relate to, but it does have a message for those willing to take the time to read.
~patty~
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Hi, Trisha,
Wow. All those 'tion' words. The poem took me a bit to read and relate to, but it does have a message for those willing to take the time to read.
~patty~
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Yes, it is ?heavy? reading, and I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha
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Yes, it is ?heavy? reading, and I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Marie Foster1
Lots of rhyming words. However, not sure of the author's intended message. I also believe intraspection was mispelled. Poem did not convey a clear message to me.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Lots of rhyming words. However, not sure of the author's intended message. I also believe intraspection was mispelled. Poem did not convey a clear message to me.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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It basically means we may think we are pleasant, but the outside mirror (people) show us otherwise. So we have to re-evaluate our behavior . Only then do we have inner harmony. Thank you for your negative review.
Comment from Robbie Yates
Lovely poem - I had no idea so many "tion" words existed! I like the message, too - that although so much of our self-belief comes from that which is external to us, both the internal and the external matter. Lovely stuff.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Lovely poem - I had no idea so many "tion" words existed! I like the message, too - that although so much of our self-belief comes from that which is external to us, both the internal and the external matter. Lovely stuff.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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According to your profile, you ? enjoy eating chips from childhood?. Aren?t they a little musty and dry by now,? LOL
Thanks so much for your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha