In Your Nail-Scarred Hands
Speaking from my heart this morning.11 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Not to worry about the currency--reading your work is satisfaction enough. I admired the impact of the rather gruesome picture and your quatrains of gratitude. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 18-May-2018
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Not to worry about the currency--reading your work is satisfaction enough. I admired the impact of the rather gruesome picture and your quatrains of gratitude. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 18-May-2018
reply by the author on 18-May-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review, Joan.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Patricia;
This is such a heartfelt poem and prayer. I felt like I was listening in on a conversation between you and Christ. I'm so glad He has given you so much, but even more happy that you appreciate all you have,
~patty~
reply by the author on 18-May-2018
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Hi, Patricia;
This is such a heartfelt poem and prayer. I felt like I was listening in on a conversation between you and Christ. I'm so glad He has given you so much, but even more happy that you appreciate all you have,
~patty~
Comment Written 18-May-2018
reply by the author on 18-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Patty. I am glad you liked this.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
I don.t usually review for points or money, but rather, for what I like. Your poem is an honest statement of love, faith, and appreciation for the blessings you have received. It's great!
reply by the author on 18-May-2018
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I don.t usually review for points or money, but rather, for what I like. Your poem is an honest statement of love, faith, and appreciation for the blessings you have received. It's great!
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 18-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Brenda.
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You're welcome, Patricia.
Comment from misscookie
I truly don't look at the price of the promotion when I read some one write
I know there are time the membership money is low for I have and still in that place.
Yet I see many people read my work and not review it which sometime me makes me sad.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 18-May-2018
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I truly don't look at the price of the promotion when I read some one write
I know there are time the membership money is low for I have and still in that place.
Yet I see many people read my work and not review it which sometime me makes me sad.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 18-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Miss Cookie.
Comment from bob cullen
What a pity more people don't reflect in this manner. It is part confession, part reflection and part appreciation. The perfect prayer, one might say.
A beautifully expressed post that says a lot about the writer. And it's all good.
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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What a pity more people don't reflect in this manner. It is part confession, part reflection and part appreciation. The perfect prayer, one might say.
A beautifully expressed post that says a lot about the writer. And it's all good.
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review, Bob.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great testament to your belief & unending faith, Patricia. Your did a great job with the descriptions of what you are thankful for & why. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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This is a great testament to your belief & unending faith, Patricia. Your did a great job with the descriptions of what you are thankful for & why. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Jan.
Comment from judiverse
This flows beautifully. The words work beautifully. You recount the blessings you have received, such as your daughters. It's wonderful that you think of your blessings in life and are thankful to God for what you've received. With some people it's just complain, complain about how tough things have been. Very uplifting and beautifully presented. judi
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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This flows beautifully. The words work beautifully. You recount the blessings you have received, such as your daughters. It's wonderful that you think of your blessings in life and are thankful to God for what you've received. With some people it's just complain, complain about how tough things have been. Very uplifting and beautifully presented. judi
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Judi.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Patricia. What a nice poem of gratefulness. We all have much to be happy and grateful for in our lives. I know what you mean about reviewing to get some promotional points. I guess we're all in the same boat. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Hi Patricia. What a nice poem of gratefulness. We all have much to be happy and grateful for in our lives. I know what you mean about reviewing to get some promotional points. I guess we're all in the same boat. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Marilyn.
Comment from Mistydawn
I think reading this beautiful poem is enough of a reward. It's so well-written, descriptive, great imagery. Very emotional, you can feel your love devotion on every line. It gives the readers a sense of calmness, peaceful tranquility. The artwork is perfect. I knew I saved this six for a reason.
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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I think reading this beautiful poem is enough of a reward. It's so well-written, descriptive, great imagery. Very emotional, you can feel your love devotion on every line. It gives the readers a sense of calmness, peaceful tranquility. The artwork is perfect. I knew I saved this six for a reason.
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Misty.
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent free verse poem. It flows with a rhythm which is near lyrical. The first and fifth stanzas in my opinion are the heart of this poem. They could almost stand alone. They transmit an image of your profound faith and trust. Stanzas three and four provide the support and a frame for that trust and faith. Stanzas two and six have important content, but their long lines disrupts the flow of the other stanzas. Well done.
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reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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This is an excellent free verse poem. It flows with a rhythm which is near lyrical. The first and fifth stanzas in my opinion are the heart of this poem. They could almost stand alone. They transmit an image of your profound faith and trust. Stanzas three and four provide the support and a frame for that trust and faith. Stanzas two and six have important content, but their long lines disrupts the flow of the other stanzas. Well done.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Henry.
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You are welcome