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Comment from brenda faye curtis
Your words perfectly illustrate that great old Nazareth song, "Love Hurts" in a bold new way! Thank you for sharing this, Bill. I got a good laugh just when I needed one.
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Your words perfectly illustrate that great old Nazareth song, "Love Hurts" in a bold new way! Thank you for sharing this, Bill. I got a good laugh just when I needed one.
Comment Written 23-May-2018
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Good. Thanks for reading this, Brenda.
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You're welcome, Bill! :)
Comment from damommy
Sure he does. lol
He's not too bright or he'd know what happens next. I think she's fooled with that 'love you for your mind' stuff.
Very funny.
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Sure he does. lol
He's not too bright or he'd know what happens next. I think she's fooled with that 'love you for your mind' stuff.
Very funny.
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thanks, da
Comment from nomi338
As much as I enjoy lovemaking with a beautiful babe, if I see one looking at me the way a fat kid looks at cake, I am getting the hell away from her with a quickness. Thank you, but no thank you. Ya know what I mean?
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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As much as I enjoy lovemaking with a beautiful babe, if I see one looking at me the way a fat kid looks at cake, I am getting the hell away from her with a quickness. Thank you, but no thank you. Ya know what I mean?
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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She likes her brain food.
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Any female that wants to feed of my brain is destined to be malnourished. LOL.
Comment from judiverse
Doesn't take much to satisfy a praying mantis, does it? Horrible to think that the females devour the males after mating. I guess they aren't the only species who is similarly bloodthirsty. That's extreme feminism. Very colorful presentation. Enjoyed the humor. judi
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Doesn't take much to satisfy a praying mantis, does it? Horrible to think that the females devour the males after mating. I guess they aren't the only species who is similarly bloodthirsty. That's extreme feminism. Very colorful presentation. Enjoyed the humor. judi
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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You are welcome. judi
Comment from Ginnygray
Interesting 5-7-5 in being attracted to someone who is attractive, but whose main interest is admiring her mind and degree of intelligence. Her feelings were mutual and they hit it off.
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Interesting 5-7-5 in being attracted to someone who is attractive, but whose main interest is admiring her mind and degree of intelligence. Her feelings were mutual and they hit it off.
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thanks, Ginny
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed the dark humor in this poem which comes only from knowing what female praying mantises do to their mates. A nice METAPHOR for some human relationships. Rod
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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I enjoyed the dark humor in this poem which comes only from knowing what female praying mantises do to their mates. A nice METAPHOR for some human relationships. Rod
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thanks, Rod