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Viewing comments for Chapter 113 "Sponge World 9"Animal poetry and short stories
13 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Super job with this one. I guess this is my new favorite. Image is great.
Favorite lines:
"Photo bombed by a sea dollar
local authorities say
starfish were present as well"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
Super job with this one. I guess this is my new favorite. Image is great.
Favorite lines:
"Photo bombed by a sea dollar
local authorities say
starfish were present as well"
Marilyn
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute poem about the Sponge world in the sea. You used very good descriptive words and I love the art work picture you used to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
This is a very cute poem about the Sponge world in the sea. You used very good descriptive words and I love the art work picture you used to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thanks,Teri
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Liked how you wrote this like a regular newsflash. Great use of alliteration of s-sounding, l-starting words also the fees/fines. Can sand dollars "see?"
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
Lol. Liked how you wrote this like a regular newsflash. Great use of alliteration of s-sounding, l-starting words also the fees/fines. Can sand dollars "see?"
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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CAN sand dollars see? I do not know.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your imagination is beyond belief! You are so inventive with these write which has to be admired, another sponge write in the bag here, delightful, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
Your imagination is beyond belief! You are so inventive with these write which has to be admired, another sponge write in the bag here, delightful, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from nomi338
Those darn lawyers will find a way to make a dollar, anywhere, anyway, anytime. Question: What do you call a hundred lawyers at the bottom of the sea? A good idea. I don't happen to agree, but it is how many view and think of lawyers.
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
Those darn lawyers will find a way to make a dollar, anywhere, anyway, anytime. Question: What do you call a hundred lawyers at the bottom of the sea? A good idea. I don't happen to agree, but it is how many view and think of lawyers.
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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They are replacing lab rats with lawyers for testing purposes. The lab workers don?t get as attached to them and there are some things even a rat won?t do.
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Ouch! LOL.
Comment from judiverse
Jolly good fun! The way you work in the sand dollars is great. Here's hoping the sea cents spent on fees and fines went to repair the damage done by undermining the photo shoot at the sponge convention. Love the idea of a sponge convention. They must have soaked up a lot of information there. Nice alliteration--sea cents and fees and fines. judi
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
Jolly good fun! The way you work in the sand dollars is great. Here's hoping the sea cents spent on fees and fines went to repair the damage done by undermining the photo shoot at the sponge convention. Love the idea of a sponge convention. They must have soaked up a lot of information there. Nice alliteration--sea cents and fees and fines. judi
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thanks, Judi. When I saw this shot I immediately imagined the sand dollar jumping into it.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Kathy Franklin
This is really a fun poem to read. The wit and imagery of a sea sponge convention is a chuckle-buckler. You've quite the imagination, compete with sea lawyers. Love it!
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
This is really a fun poem to read. The wit and imagery of a sea sponge convention is a chuckle-buckler. You've quite the imagination, compete with sea lawyers. Love it!
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thanks, Kathy
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent humorous explanation of a photograph. The internal rhyme extends the salty seascape. But, why are the poor dollars footing the bill? The boxed soaps with scents are center stage and much more wealthy than the skeletal sea dollars. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
This is an excellent humorous explanation of a photograph. The internal rhyme extends the salty seascape. But, why are the poor dollars footing the bill? The boxed soaps with scents are center stage and much more wealthy than the skeletal sea dollars. Well done.
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thanks, Henry. Soaps were the sponsors. : )
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I remember the ads. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL!! That is so funny, Bill! How do you come up with all these poems to go with these pics? They are really good, and so much fun. I loved this one! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
LOL!! That is so funny, Bill! How do you come up with all these poems to go with these pics? They are really good, and so much fun. I loved this one! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thanks, Sandra
Comment from brenda faye curtis
How many sea dollars does it take to keep a sea lawyer on retainer?
As usual, you've created an entertaining piece of prose using a picture I'll never know why is out on the internet. Seriously, why are these out there?!
Doesn't matter; I love the pranka!
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
How many sea dollars does it take to keep a sea lawyer on retainer?
As usual, you've created an entertaining piece of prose using a picture I'll never know why is out on the internet. Seriously, why are these out there?!
Doesn't matter; I love the pranka!
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thanks, Brenda. I think someone wants to sell sponges down by the sea shore.
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You're welcome, Bill, and probably right. :)