Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem with very good words that describe what the tiny spider is doing. You used great words and great art work that went together well. Love, Teri

 Comment Written 08-May-2018

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reply by the author on 09-May-2018

thanks Teri, Your kind review is much appreciated.
Blessings
Shirley

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Yes, I also share you admiration and fascination with nature and all the wondrous things that aren't us. Gorgeous artwork Shirley and a perfect poem to complement this fascinating little spider.

Just lovely!

Gloria

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 08-May-2018

Hi Gloria,
Thank you so much for your time and review.
Our shared interests just show that great minds think alike. Lol.
Blessings
Shirley

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, your love of nature is evident in your poem. I so enjoyed it, and I always find spiders fascinating. They are so industrious. Your careful word choices pay off to create a very smooth reading poem full of vivid imagery. I noticed no errors and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 08-May-2018

Thanks so much Ana,
I appreciate your time and review.
Blessings
Shirley

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

I don't care for spiders, actually I'm scared to death of them. Will run screaming if one gets near me. But you're right their webs are beautiful. They look so tiny so delicate yet somehow stand against bad weather. I got brave one day admired a web from afar way far away, lol. The poem is well, written great description and it has a nice flow.

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 08-May-2018

Thanks for a lovely review.
Your time is appreciated.
Blessings
Shirley