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Comment from frogbook
Great description and alliteration. An excellent piece of data describing this illusive lizard fellow. You came up with great words to use going along with the letters.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
Great description and alliteration. An excellent piece of data describing this illusive lizard fellow. You came up with great words to use going along with the letters.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Thanks, FB
Comment from lyenochka
Well done acrostic poem with alliteration in most of the lines. And it makes me think of people who live like chameleons either online or in person. Makes you wonder if they are dangerous or not.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
Well done acrostic poem with alliteration in most of the lines. And it makes me think of people who live like chameleons either online or in person. Makes you wonder if they are dangerous or not.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written acrostic poem about the Chameleon. You chose very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing! Blessings Teri
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
This is a very well written acrostic poem about the Chameleon. You chose very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing! Blessings Teri
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Teri
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you are so welcome my friend!
Comment from nomi338
That is a great description of said reptile. Your skillset reflects a military training that would have gained you a possible nod of approval from your squad leader. Not too much, no sense in swelling your head and making you overconfident. Good on you for this.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
That is a great description of said reptile. Your skillset reflects a military training that would have gained you a possible nod of approval from your squad leader. Not too much, no sense in swelling your head and making you overconfident. Good on you for this.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Thanks, nomi (and Seargent Wehri).
Comment from judiverse
This guy is definitely a member of the CIA (Chameleon Intelligence Agency). I think the words you've chosen are fitting for that organization--escaping detection, enigmatic, and neutralizing noticeability. Where are the females to swoon over this Bond-like creature? Excellent word choices. Nice alliteration with limited locatability and neutralizing noticeability. Fun piece. judi
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
This guy is definitely a member of the CIA (Chameleon Intelligence Agency). I think the words you've chosen are fitting for that organization--escaping detection, enigmatic, and neutralizing noticeability. Where are the females to swoon over this Bond-like creature? Excellent word choices. Nice alliteration with limited locatability and neutralizing noticeability. Fun piece. judi
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Judi, for the thorough review. Bill
Comment from meeshu
great acrostic form poem, bill. the last four are the best, you were starting to have fun weren't you. well it was fun to read. good luck in the future.......meeshu
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
great acrostic form poem, bill. the last four are the best, you were starting to have fun weren't you. well it was fun to read. good luck in the future.......meeshu
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Meeshu, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Bridget Myer
What a refreshing piece with firm well thought out lines for your acrostic poem.
It is descriptive and well thought out to achieve such a joyfully amazing natural piece.
I enjoyed it immensely.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
What a refreshing piece with firm well thought out lines for your acrostic poem.
It is descriptive and well thought out to achieve such a joyfully amazing natural piece.
I enjoyed it immensely.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Bridget