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Comment from nomi338
If you are not already drunk by the time you ingest that crazy worm, you soon will be, trust me. That is something you may not want to try. That particular one does not look to happy to be where he is. In fact he looks poised to exact revenge on the hapless, unlucky sucker who have the nerve to swallow him. Good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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If you are not already drunk by the time you ingest that crazy worm, you soon will be, trust me. That is something you may not want to try. That particular one does not look to happy to be where he is. In fact he looks poised to exact revenge on the hapless, unlucky sucker who have the nerve to swallow him. Good luck.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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My friend said he and some other cronies were drinking some Brand X tequilla that had no worm, so, they dropped one in and told ?a new guy? to drink and eat it. When it moved in his mouth he blew chow.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Muy interesante, Senor Bill. Por que no es la primer linea en espanol tambien?
Ah, 'gusanos' esta una palabra demasiado larga para el 5-7-5. Un poema divertido.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Lol. Muy interesante, Senor Bill. Por que no es la primer linea en espanol tambien?
Ah, 'gusanos' esta una palabra demasiado larga para el 5-7-5. Un poema divertido.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
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Muchas gracias
Comment from Ulla
Pues si senor!!. Borracho seguramente esta. I liked your Spanish input on this one. been drowned in tequila would ether be a nightmare or a dream come true. All the best. Ulla:))
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Pues si senor!!. Borracho seguramente esta. I liked your Spanish input on this one. been drowned in tequila would ether be a nightmare or a dream come true. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
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Muchas Gracias
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De nada!
Comment from judiverse
What do you know? In Spanish, you have a perfect 5-7-5. I remember a song of many years ago, "La Vida Loca," but can't remember who sang it. Are the worms drunk from being in the tequila, or is it the person drinking? Maybe both. I don't drink tequila because I couldn't stand the worm thing. Clever idea, and great artwork. judi
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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What do you know? In Spanish, you have a perfect 5-7-5. I remember a song of many years ago, "La Vida Loca," but can't remember who sang it. Are the worms drunk from being in the tequila, or is it the person drinking? Maybe both. I don't drink tequila because I couldn't stand the worm thing. Clever idea, and great artwork. judi
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Ricky Martin. Livin? La Vida Loca
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No, it was a female I remember singing the song. A country artist, as I recall. judi
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Someone else may have covered it, but Ricky Martin introduced it twenty years ago. So says Wikipedia
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My memory is fuzzy. What I remembered is "Mi Vida Loca" which was sung by Pam Tillis. judi
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Dif?ent song
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I just listened to Ricky Martin on YouTube. I prefer Pam Tillis singing "Mi Vida Loca." judi
Comment from Poetic Friend
Okay, Bill, thank God, I know a little Spanish. Otherwise, I would have to google fro translation. Oops, I just realize that you provided in the translation in your author's notes.
As usual, you make all insects and creepy crawly seems so interesting, giving them life (via the use of personification) that humans enjoy.
Thank you for the smiles, Bill. At least, the worms are happy.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Okay, Bill, thank God, I know a little Spanish. Otherwise, I would have to google fro translation. Oops, I just realize that you provided in the translation in your author's notes.
As usual, you make all insects and creepy crawly seems so interesting, giving them life (via the use of personification) that humans enjoy.
Thank you for the smiles, Bill. At least, the worms are happy.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
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Muchas gracias
Comment from frogbook
OMG, I love this one-as soon as I saw the picture I cracked up and then the poem was genius to go with. My favorite so far in the worm series and probably an all time favorite.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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OMG, I love this one-as soon as I saw the picture I cracked up and then the poem was genius to go with. My favorite so far in the worm series and probably an all time favorite.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
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Wow! I may have to begin writing everything in Spanish.
Comment from RodG
I feel am at a Jimmy Buffett concert amidst the crow. Everyone is drinking tequila, no one's sober, and maybe the night won't end. Like your use of Spanish here, too. Rod
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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I feel am at a Jimmy Buffett concert amidst the crow. Everyone is drinking tequila, no one's sober, and maybe the night won't end. Like your use of Spanish here, too. Rod
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Rod. Viviendos la vida loca