Precious Gems
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Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Donna!
I started at the beginning and have read each selection from the introduction to 10 - this one is my favorite one so far. I do love Pleiades poetry :) Your form is perfect! Thanks for sharing this one and for the mention in the author's notes. That is really sweet.
Kim
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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Hi Donna!
I started at the beginning and have read each selection from the introduction to 10 - this one is my favorite one so far. I do love Pleiades poetry :) Your form is perfect! Thanks for sharing this one and for the mention in the author's notes. That is really sweet.
Kim
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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Dear Kim, Thank you for giving me so many different forms of poetry - I often use what you use. I think I'll write a poem called Copycat! Thanks for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
When you stop to think about it, humanity does have so many ways and things that we "build" and the "ing's" of life are plentiful. This is a good poem to showcase that.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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When you stop to think about it, humanity does have so many ways and things that we "build" and the "ing's" of life are plentiful. This is a good poem to showcase that.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dear Cindy, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from karenina
So many think of this as a form that's been around since the classics. It was, in fact, invented in 1999 by Craig Tigerman, Sol Magazine's Lead Editor. It became quite popular and for good reason. You've done it proud...
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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So many think of this as a form that's been around since the classics. It was, in fact, invented in 1999 by Craig Tigerman, Sol Magazine's Lead Editor. It became quite popular and for good reason. You've done it proud...
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Pleiades poem. You seem to got the format correct and your choice to work with B words was well thought out. Telling a good storybof building and baking.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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A very well-written Pleiades poem. You seem to got the format correct and your choice to work with B words was well thought out. Telling a good storybof building and baking.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Debbie Pope
What an uplifting poem. Full of little things that actually mean everything. When you view baking a birthday cake as a blessing rather than a chore, your life is enriched. A happy life is definitely a building process. Excellent job of portraying this.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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What an uplifting poem. Full of little things that actually mean everything. When you view baking a birthday cake as a blessing rather than a chore, your life is enriched. A happy life is definitely a building process. Excellent job of portraying this.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Debbie, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The building blocks of life here in your poem of all the 'B's'. Life should always be about having fun times, building a life for the future with some caring along the way, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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The building blocks of life here in your poem of all the 'B's'. Life should always be about having fun times, building a life for the future with some caring along the way, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Dove
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Pleiades poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it my friend! love, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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This is a very well written Pleiades poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it my friend! love, Teri
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a nice verse about building, baking, and breaking in.
Well written, a nice rhythm.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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This is a nice verse about building, baking, and breaking in.
Well written, a nice rhythm.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Sharon, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from patcelaw
I like the format of each line having 6 syllables and each line starting with the same letter of the alphabet. Have a wonderful weekend. Patricia
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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I like the format of each line having 6 syllables and each line starting with the same letter of the alphabet. Have a wonderful weekend. Patricia
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dear Patricia, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove