About My Front Door
The Sentence Story Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from Katya
Very amusing! Good dialogue, well-drawn characters. I like this one a lot. Of course, i could see the end coming a mile away, but wasn't that the point? Thanks for putting it out.
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Very amusing! Good dialogue, well-drawn characters. I like this one a lot. Of course, i could see the end coming a mile away, but wasn't that the point? Thanks for putting it out.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
Comment from Beck Fenton
A delightful take on the contest prompt. Shows that when opportunity knocks it sometimes has to be left shut. Glad for the smile and good luck in the contest!
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A delightful take on the contest prompt. Shows that when opportunity knocks it sometimes has to be left shut. Glad for the smile and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks we don't change anything on time, feel sad at others comment about need of change; we change after incurring loss; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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This speaks we don't change anything on time, feel sad at others comment about need of change; we change after incurring loss; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Dr. Alcreator.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Sentence writing prompt.
Your story of the nosy neighbor Mitch is clear and well written.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Sentence writing prompt.
Your story of the nosy neighbor Mitch is clear and well written.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018