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Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Bill. This is so amusing and clever. You are on a roll. I give you credit for finding a man's name to rhyme with jellyfishes. Great job with this post. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
Hi Bill. This is so amusing and clever. You are on a roll. I give you credit for finding a man's name to rhyme with jellyfishes. Great job with this post. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Marilyn.
Comment from frogbook
This is a clever one, my friend. I was excited to see a series on Jellyfish as they are quite fascinating. I'm sure you will see them as no one else has!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
This is a clever one, my friend. I was excited to see a series on Jellyfish as they are quite fascinating. I'm sure you will see them as no one else has!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Hope it goes well.
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very cute ballad about the jellyfish, Aloysius. You used very cute wording and great imagery from your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
Bill, This is a very cute ballad about the jellyfish, Aloysius. You used very cute wording and great imagery from your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
Oh. I guess it wasn't the super poisonous box jellyfish then. Good that he survived and knows that it's much better to not hold jellyfish of any kind. Glad you're onto jellyfish!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
Oh. I guess it wasn't the super poisonous box jellyfish then. Good that he survived and knows that it's much better to not hold jellyfish of any kind. Glad you're onto jellyfish!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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I didn't want to be too dark so I saved Aloysius at the end.
Comment from Cass Carlton
I'm very glad he did survive. Jelly fish poison is about as toxic as toxic can get.
There are Australian beaches where, at certain times of the year, it would be very dangerous to swim as there are floods of nasty stinging blobs of goo in the water.
Does Aloysius have any antidote for jellyfish poison? A home grown one is vinegar.
Well, here we go with another lot of poems about odd creatures that most people ignore in favour of "prettier" topics. Well done cheers Cass. ( I still think frogs would be a winner)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
I'm very glad he did survive. Jelly fish poison is about as toxic as toxic can get.
There are Australian beaches where, at certain times of the year, it would be very dangerous to swim as there are floods of nasty stinging blobs of goo in the water.
Does Aloysius have any antidote for jellyfish poison? A home grown one is vinegar.
Well, here we go with another lot of poems about odd creatures that most people ignore in favour of "prettier" topics. Well done cheers Cass. ( I still think frogs would be a winner)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Cass, for the great review. I?ll put frogs in the hopper.
Comment from judiverse
Great name choice--Aloysius. He should have known better than to mess around with jellyfish. I would suggest he turn his attention to edible jelly--grape, strawberry, whatever his choice. He could eat it and it would never attack him. Glad he managed to survive the bites, though. Great energy and playful presentation. it would sound fun read aloud. judi
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
Great name choice--Aloysius. He should have known better than to mess around with jellyfish. I would suggest he turn his attention to edible jelly--grape, strawberry, whatever his choice. He could eat it and it would never attack him. Glad he managed to survive the bites, though. Great energy and playful presentation. it would sound fun read aloud. judi
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Judi, for the terrific review. Bill
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Gloria ....
This is just too funny, Bill. Right off we're into totally unique country ie playing with jellyfishes and then when they did what jellyfishes do, ie sting. It still comes as a surprise.
LOL. Great job with this delightful ballad and I'm glad to hear he survived.
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
This is just too funny, Bill. Right off we're into totally unique country ie playing with jellyfishes and then when they did what jellyfishes do, ie sting. It still comes as a surprise.
LOL. Great job with this delightful ballad and I'm glad to hear he survived.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Gloria, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from cailinraine8
Again, very cute and entertaining... the accent adds a further twist of humour and it is a bouncy poem that could be a song.. I can see the banjo, the bouncer, and the Bailey's....
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
Again, very cute and entertaining... the accent adds a further twist of humour and it is a bouncy poem that could be a song.. I can see the banjo, the bouncer, and the Bailey's....
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks for the fun review, Cailin.
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading this cute and clever verse you wrote. The alternate spellings really added depth to this cute read. Well done and thanks for sharing this one.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
I enjoyed reading this cute and clever verse you wrote. The alternate spellings really added depth to this cute read. Well done and thanks for sharing this one.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Sugarray
Comment from robina1978
This poem is a true delight to read and review. A boy used to play with jellyfish. One day they stung his throat. He heard the angels singing or was it mermaids wit a song. It did not really matter though, cause he survived it, don't you know. Written as a true Ballad.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
This poem is a true delight to read and review. A boy used to play with jellyfish. One day they stung his throat. He heard the angels singing or was it mermaids wit a song. It did not really matter though, cause he survived it, don't you know. Written as a true Ballad.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Ine, for the kind review. Bill