Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha, I had no idea Plato was a bee, so I very much appreciate being educated here. I knew he was smart, but not this smart.

Great job friend Bill. You always amuse with your witty writes. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

This may be another Plato

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Hi Bill
The alliterations throughout this fun poem reign supreme, posh patoot, sucked some syrup in his snoot, great graphics as well................loved it
Mitchell

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks, Mitchell

Comment from damommy

Excellent

it's almost a tongue twister. Good alliteration. I know everyone will love the posh patoot.

Lovely picture with a good profile shot of Plato. 8-)

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

You are going all-out for alliteration in this. I like posh patoot the best. If you can avoid the nettles, that's all to the good. Sounds like Plato needed to find a better way to occupy his time. If there were pretty purple petals about, maybe it's a case of spring fever. If you were still teaching, you could have your poems posted around the classroom. "I want to Beelieve." judi

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Fun review.

reply by judiverse on 18-Feb-2018

You're very welcome. judi

reply by judiverse on 18-Feb-2018

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written short poem about the bee with the pollen. You used very good wording and lovely art work with the flowers and the bee. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

With a snoot full of sucked up syrup, he no doubt scooted on home where his wife getting a scent of him probably berated him for being a besotted scamp. Suckers always suck at being responsible suitors or so I've been told.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

I've heard it said.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

I turned my computer on today and my message box was full of Shotisms. They are like witticisms without the wit. At least it's better than a roach infestation. However, I feel like I've traded one computer bug for another.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks (I think).

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

A posh patoot!!! omg i love that....that will forever bee ;-) stuck in my mind...comes the Spring...I'll bee :-) watching for those flying plato posh patoots!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks, sj