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Comment from lyenochka
Hooray for the Pollinator. I almost want his 'business' to be 'buzziness' on his back. Lol. But it's quite evident how much work Benny has been doing. Thanks for writing about the gardener's friend.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
Hooray for the Pollinator. I almost want his 'business' to be 'buzziness' on his back. Lol. But it's quite evident how much work Benny has been doing. Thanks for writing about the gardener's friend.
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Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from nomi338
Honey Bee good or I'll Bee bad. That was the threat my bet gal gave me and brother believe me when she was bad she was very bad. After that I was the best little Bee you ever did see. Please Beeleeve me.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
Honey Bee good or I'll Bee bad. That was the threat my bet gal gave me and brother believe me when she was bad she was very bad. After that I was the best little Bee you ever did see. Please Beeleeve me.
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Thanks, nomi, for sharing.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, we couldn;t do without him. If he was not there, we wouldn;thave any vegetables and fruit. Hence it's so frightening they're dying off. A great wee poem. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
Hi Bill, we couldn;t do without him. If he was not there, we wouldn;thave any vegetables and fruit. Hence it's so frightening they're dying off. A great wee poem. All the best. Ulla:))
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from judiverse
We'll have to put him right up there with the Terminator. The bee is at least a busy creature, and we can appreciate his usefulness. Very colorful, and I like the designation the Pollinator. Clever third line. The bee must take delight in his work. Great artwork choice. judi
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
We'll have to put him right up there with the Terminator. The bee is at least a busy creature, and we can appreciate his usefulness. Very colorful, and I like the designation the Pollinator. Clever third line. The bee must take delight in his work. Great artwork choice. judi
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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You're quite welcome. judi
Comment from damommy
He certainly carries his work with him. Without him and others like him, there'd be no fruits or vegetables, or flowers.
Busy as a bee are true words.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
He certainly carries his work with him. Without him and others like him, there'd be no fruits or vegetables, or flowers.
Busy as a bee are true words.
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Thanks, da
Comment from The kurlman
Bill, you have been at this for awhile. What a great job tying the picture and your poem together. You nailed your story in 3 lines. Very impressive. I hope you critique some of my poems. The kurlman
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
Bill, you have been at this for awhile. What a great job tying the picture and your poem together. You nailed your story in 3 lines. Very impressive. I hope you critique some of my poems. The kurlman
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks, to, for the nice review. I will fan you now. Bill
Comment from Teri7
Now I really like this type of poem and the subject. You used very good descriptive words and the nice picture. It almost looks like the bee has snow on its wings and body, but I guess that is the pollen! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
Now I really like this type of poem and the subject. You used very good descriptive words and the nice picture. It almost looks like the bee has snow on its wings and body, but I guess that is the pollen! Blessings, Teri
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Thanks, Teri