Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Ohmy lady, you have come so far, this is excellently done and the flow and rhyme are exceptional. Very descriptive and the scene you display is spot on

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks very much my friend
Hug

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I love your theme of God's jewelry, He gives us so much in nature that is truly His jewelry. "Sunshine is precious wealth" is a great line for it is true. Excellent theme here that reminds the reader of God's creation.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Hello to Falmouth ( not foul mouth I hope) I was raised in England, so I?m drawn to your review by a fellow Limey.
I thank you everso much for a smashing review!

reply by mermaids on 07-Feb-2018

I live in Falmouth, Ma, here on Cape Cod. Elaine

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

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Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

These are very beautiful rhyming stanza's about God's treasures that he shares with us each day. You used great descriptive words and imagery from the great art work! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Awesome! Thank you so much. It means a lot to me coming from you. I feel so much lighter and content since I joined your club
Hugs, and blessings back, Trisha