And Once Upon A Journey Made
A seaman looks back on memories.36 total reviews
Comment from Laurie Holding
Another stellar piece, so I'll spend my six stars (wisely) upon YOU today! I don't know how you manage to put out so many beauties, and stay on top of the charts the way you do. Any advice would be so welcome. Meanwhile, I will re-read this one and relish your words, especially, "Far from the scented verdant glade/with mainsail fully trimmed." So lovely.
Another stellar piece, so I'll spend my six stars (wisely) upon YOU today! I don't know how you manage to put out so many beauties, and stay on top of the charts the way you do. Any advice would be so welcome. Meanwhile, I will re-read this one and relish your words, especially, "Far from the scented verdant glade/with mainsail fully trimmed." So lovely.
Comment Written 17-May-2024
Comment from Shanbreen
Easyeverett1, this is a well written poem. There are some beautiful lines --""But once abundance youth did thrive", or "a mind and body born to win." You capture the passing of youth so well, but not rescinding on things that bring beautiful memories says a lot about a seaman's positive attitude. Well done.
Easyeverett1, this is a well written poem. There are some beautiful lines --""But once abundance youth did thrive", or "a mind and body born to win." You capture the passing of youth so well, but not rescinding on things that bring beautiful memories says a lot about a seaman's positive attitude. Well done.
Comment Written 17-May-2024
Comment from Aussie
Ah, memories are made of these. The sea, the salt and wind whipping the sails to action. I liked your poem so much. I grew up with boats and fishing with my Dad. To return to the verdant green and feet of clay leaves us bereft of freedom sailing the seas of our youth. Well done Tom.
Ah, memories are made of these. The sea, the salt and wind whipping the sails to action. I liked your poem so much. I grew up with boats and fishing with my Dad. To return to the verdant green and feet of clay leaves us bereft of freedom sailing the seas of our youth. Well done Tom.
Comment Written 17-May-2024
Comment from Charism7
A memory that came alive in a poem. It is nicely written and the theme is presented well. I like the metaphors that the author used. Good poem. Keep going!
A memory that came alive in a poem. It is nicely written and the theme is presented well. I like the metaphors that the author used. Good poem. Keep going!
Comment Written 17-May-2024
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the pace in this peace it was very uptempo and carried you right through. The picture of a life well lived was cemented in the mind of this reader.
I like the pace in this peace it was very uptempo and carried you right through. The picture of a life well lived was cemented in the mind of this reader.
Comment Written 17-May-2024
Comment from JRaeVaughn
From doddering eyes, pure perfection. This hark to the process of aging is a lovely rendering with impeccable lines such as; "Where eros was the truth alive" and so much more. I was highly engaged through the progression of growing long in the tooth as time flitters by, while completely satiated by visual and emotional indulgence. Your quatrains flow like an open sea (smelling the briny mist) set in a beautiful structure, with a steady breeze at the stern and stunningly captures the duration of the life cycle with an eventual rendezvous.
A sincere pleasure to read,
JR
From doddering eyes, pure perfection. This hark to the process of aging is a lovely rendering with impeccable lines such as; "Where eros was the truth alive" and so much more. I was highly engaged through the progression of growing long in the tooth as time flitters by, while completely satiated by visual and emotional indulgence. Your quatrains flow like an open sea (smelling the briny mist) set in a beautiful structure, with a steady breeze at the stern and stunningly captures the duration of the life cycle with an eventual rendezvous.
A sincere pleasure to read,
JR
Comment Written 17-May-2024
Comment from QC Poet
A great tale of an aged sailor's regret for having to stop sailing perhaps Eros sent the lady mermaid of his dreams and still longs for the sea's adventures Thanks for sharing your poetry in the sea adventure
A great tale of an aged sailor's regret for having to stop sailing perhaps Eros sent the lady mermaid of his dreams and still longs for the sea's adventures Thanks for sharing your poetry in the sea adventure
Comment Written 16-May-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading this nostalgic poem of the sea. Perfect rhyme and meter, as always, make for an enjoyable read. Excellent leading line to 'hook' the reader.
Blessings
Janet
I enjoyed reading this nostalgic poem of the sea. Perfect rhyme and meter, as always, make for an enjoyable read. Excellent leading line to 'hook' the reader.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 16-May-2024
Comment from artisart4u
Your poem is nice about a seaman looking back.
It makes you think of splashy water and the breeze when you are at a beach.
Congratulations on your wins and good luck with your poem.
Your poem is nice about a seaman looking back.
It makes you think of splashy water and the breeze when you are at a beach.
Congratulations on your wins and good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 16-May-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is good to hear these old seamen have survived to tell their tales here and I enjoyed this memory of riding the waves. A clever opening stanza and a fine sentiment here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
It is good to hear these old seamen have survived to tell their tales here and I enjoyed this memory of riding the waves. A clever opening stanza and a fine sentiment here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-May-2024