Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Umm. I don't know what to make of this one. I guess it must be symbolic of human history as told via the minuscule amoeba existence? I had no idea that karman ghia was spelled like that. Perhaps the UFO contains amoebas?

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thanks for responding. This was sad posting.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

It's a damn shame what happened to this poem. It was going along so well when suddenly it met with disaster, causing it to shake, quake and bake. It really broke my heart as this potentially fine poem just fell the hell apart.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Show me where it was ever good and I?ll try to fix it.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Bill, I say there's room for all types of poetry including what you have referred to as a horrible and useless poem. Mind you, that may also be referring to something else.

Lots of great satire in this post. Yay. Let's Make Amoebas Great Again.

Gloria

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

This went off the rails early, but I posted it anyway. I wa# watching the film, Kiss Kiss Bang Bang and lost all perspective.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

A weird poem, change and unexpected happening and incident appeal, a giant leader came for ruling over the world, world is not on the safe sector, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thanks, ALD. You are too. Kind.

Comment from Sugarray77

Good

Hahaha. Sooo bad, but clever and cute. Thanks for sharing this with us. The artwork definitely supports your theme. This was a fun read and I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thanks, Sugarray.