Comment from Shenetta

Exceptional

I love this poem. It exemplifies the essence of lethargy. It is simple, pure and honest. It is a poem I can see myself reading over and over again. It's a poem in which many people can relate and feel.

 Comment Written 08-May-2019

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reply by the author on 08-May-2019

thank you shenetta :)

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

A good 1-6-1 prompt contest entry. I think that artwork would be perfect for your subject and add the right touch. Good luck on this contest. Regards.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

thank you ray :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A clever write to describe how we all feel at times! You matched up these two words perfectly, it's how I am feeling right now, might have a nap after reading your words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

naps are awesome! :)

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt.
A good message in your few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

thank you sharon :)