Comment from Treischel

Excellent

Love the alliterations you used in the stanzas. Excellent winter imagery. Nice iambic tetrameter. The alternating rhyme works very well. I felt the chill. Well done!

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017

Thanks so much.
I appreciate your review.
:-) Shirley

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Shirley, that's ok...you get enough rain...you don't need snow too...I love your poem...gives ya the chills...and I love your picture...so very nicely written sweet girl...beautiful...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017

Thanks Linda.
It is always a pleasure to receive your reviews.
:-) Shirley

reply by l.raven on 11-Nov-2017

your so welcome Shirley...smiling back at ya...love xxoo

Comment from Abby Wilson-hand

Excellent

I CAN'T BELEIEVE HOW COLD IT IS OUT THERE
TODAY. LOVED YOUR POEM I SO AM NOT LOOKING
FORWORDS TO ALL THE INCHES WE ARE ABOUT TO GET

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks Abby,
I appreciate your review.
I have to confess I live on the far north east coast of NSW Australia
and summer is just a couple of weeks away. It's currently a little cool
With rain showers and storms about
I wrote this poem in winter but I've been off site a lot completing courses so have only just posted it.
I have not seen or experienced snow so I will be thinking of you this season.
:-) Shirley

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about winter and its beauty and its cold that we rather stay indoors than to roam outside. A chimney fire will keep us warm and cozy while the winter winds blow.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017

Thanks Sandra,
Your time and review is appreciated.
:-) Shirley

Comment from Paul Bownas

Excellent

A great poem- I pondered for some time, and probably should have given it a six. My apologies for not doing that. Autumn and Winter are two of my favourite seasons, and your description was delightful, and gave me a strong sense of nostalgia!

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thank you Paul,
Your time and review are appreciated.
No apology necessary.
:-) Shirley