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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from frogbook
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A really polished and likely well know Walrus we have here. What a pic you found and you made the best of it with your clever comparisons in "walrus-speak."

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
    Thanks, FB, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Ulla
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hahaha, I love it,Bill. You have such a great imagination that I don't know what more to say. They won't let me get off with this comment. I loved your poem though. All the best. Ulla>)))

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Ulla, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
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To my mind there are few things more funny than a trim walrus in a well tailored suit carrying a powerful weapon, drinking cocktails and just being debonair. Your imagination know no boundaries obviously. This is a handy tool for a writer who delves into the absurd. Good work.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
    Thanks, nomi. The suit names the ...man.
reply by nomi338 on 09-Nov-2017
    Got it.
Comment from Gloria ....
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I always love a double OH nine Walrus particularly because of how he enjoys his martinis.

A most unique post and also poetic form.

Thanks for the share.

Gloria

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Gloria
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Bill. This is a humorous walrus poem. I like this one the best so far. There are some good lines and rhyming within and clever wording. An enjoyable read. Marilyn

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Marilyn.
Comment from damommy
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I'd like to hear him say, 'James. James Walrus.' LOL

Love the tuxedo and the fact that he like fish ball martinis. Very funny.

Where did you get this picture? Did you draw it? Cute.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    I think that would be...
    Walrus, James Walrus
reply by damommy on 08-Nov-2017
    You're right. lol
Comment from Ellie707
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What an interesting take-off on Agent 007. This poem is funny and I sense the author enjoys the spoofs as much as the reader. He did a good job at rhyming.

Wonderful poem.

Ellie


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 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Ellie, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Teri7
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O.K. Now this is a cute little poem about a CIA Walrus or something like that. You used very cute descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. It was cute to read and review. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Another good one. Well done.
Well written and nicely rhymed. Paints a clear and funny picture.
It's nice to give a lighter side to some of the serious things in life.
Thank you for sharing this one.
Sharon

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    Thanks, Sharon.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! You have such a quirky sense of humor! I don't like 007 movies in general but he sure does have a whole lot of cool tools. But I still think I'd prefer the batmobile.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    I couldn't find a walrus in a Batman suit.