Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

LOL!
Hi, Bill;
I loved the accent of the walrus and the manner in which he spoke to the man whose help he enlisted. So glad to hear he was successful in getting out. Hope the pool is deep enough to keep him saturated,

Thank you for sharing,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks, Patty. This might be entitled "Free Wally".

reply by Mustang Patty on 09-Nov-2017

That would be an awesome title for this one!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Always a chuckle, and a Wally in a coat and hat, crazy.
Thank you for that.
Well written and easy to follow, it paints a good and funny picture.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you, Sharon.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

What a fool. Aiding and abetting a fugitive walrus can get you a lot of years in the slammer. Worse yet they may force you to take his place at the zoo. How would you like them apples? Next time, you would do better to just ignore the bugger. LOL.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thanks, nomi.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Later that day, a man named Wally purchased a new wardrobe of clothes at the Clothes-R-US store, bought a wading pool, and forced the sushi restaurant to close early after eating a week's worth of seafood.
Later that week...' I love your slightly twisted very dark sense of humour as I have mentioned before, and how you add accents into your characters speech. This was delightful to read, funny and smart. Ps: Been close to a Walrus? BOY do they stink!! Love and regards Meia :)

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you, Meia, for the encouraging review, Bill.

Comment from Possummagic

Exceptional

That has to be the funniest thing I've read in a long time. My hubby and I just interpreted it and had a roaring laugh. Fantastic job on this one Bill! PM

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Wow! Thanks, PM.

Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

The Walrus found him a willing participant in his locked up situation. It is comical how the whole undertaking came about. Lynlyrd, a good-hearted fella, saw no problem in helping the Walrus get a new identity and food.

Phillip

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thanks for the great review and for fanning me. Bill

reply by pbomar1115 on 06-Nov-2017

You're welcome, Bill.

Phillip

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I gotta tell ya, Bill, this is gonna be a most unique tale. Actually I very much likey and especially the vernacular. With all the important big shops what can go wrong?

A delightfully fun write.

Gloria

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks, gloria, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! That's hilarious! I sure hope that Lynyrd was a wealthy man because sushi is not a cheap meal! Good use of accented dialogue and humorous outcome. Plot could be a children's story.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks, lyenochka, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from damommy

Excellent

I imagine he could quickly clean out a sushi bar. lol

Were he and the gentleman that helped him still friends?

Loved the dialect.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thank, da, for taking a look at this. I will write a follow-on story soon.

Comment from frierajac

Excellent

This is a pleasant read. I can just imagine a walrus with a huge mustachio
wobbling through an entrance gate to the parking lot of the Zoo, in a children's book, naturally

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks, frierajac.

reply by frierajac on 05-Nov-2017

Best Wishes