Brrrr...
Winter is coming, ready or not.5 total reviews
Comment from frierajac
This seems quite graphic at a glance. I wonder if it would have a frightening effect on a person who is genuinely frightened of Winter. I know it made me cringe.
I hadn't thought of a season as being carnivorous.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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This seems quite graphic at a glance. I wonder if it would have a frightening effect on a person who is genuinely frightened of Winter. I know it made me cringe.
I hadn't thought of a season as being carnivorous.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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I like to write with a "twist". Thank you for reading and reviewing.
brigitte
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how about winter tells the advent and passes messages for coming into life though some may feel desolate but it makes compassionless and dry, ready or not; I liked.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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This speaks how about winter tells the advent and passes messages for coming into life though some may feel desolate but it makes compassionless and dry, ready or not; I liked.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thank you kindly for reading and reviewing.
Brigitte
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the feelings the first signs of winter's cold brings to mind. It can be very cold but we can dress up.warm and stay indoors to.beat the icy weather.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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A very well-written poem about the feelings the first signs of winter's cold brings to mind. It can be very cold but we can dress up.warm and stay indoors to.beat the icy weather.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing,
Brigitte
Comment from Poetic Friend
Dear Mystery Author,
This poem, in its brevity, says just enough to personify winter. I like the first person voice used in this poem. The imagery is just stunning.
I am not read the other entries, but this one is quite strong. This is a very good entry in the contest. Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy the remainder of your weekend.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Dear Mystery Author,
This poem, in its brevity, says just enough to personify winter. I like the first person voice used in this poem. The imagery is just stunning.
I am not read the other entries, but this one is quite strong. This is a very good entry in the contest. Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy the remainder of your weekend.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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You have a great weekend, also. Thank you for this great review. personally, I like winter.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good personification of winter writing contest entry.
It paints a clear picture with a clear message.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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A good personification of winter writing contest entry.
It paints a clear picture with a clear message.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Thank you very kindly for this nice review. Readers, such as yourself, keep me writing.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte