Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Hi Bill
Another wonderful duck poem that was full of invention and humour, great wording throughout with a brilliant picture that compliments the poem brilliantly
Mitchell

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017

Thank you, Mitchell.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Enjoyable little poem and a pleasing rhythm and rhyme scheme. Of course, the picture is the famous Donald who has quite the speech impediment. I liked the "Navy Seal" reference.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your "Duck World " poem. You told your story and rhymed it well and I think by the photo could have been Donald.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017

Thanks, Marybell

reply by marybell1 on 18-Oct-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about the disruptive communication made by the President and allowed the things to go for good as the poet is not happy with the treat and meet; I liked.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, ALD

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a really cute poem you have penned. You used very cute descriptive wording and very cute imagery with the picture of Donald Duck. It was fun to read and review. Did not see any spag! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

A word of caution. When the duck quacks like Donald and you find him in Mexico, better be on the lookout because he might not be playing fair and square. Do not buy anything he might be selling, especially clothing, hotel space and college enrollment. By all means listen carefully to what he says be cause ship and shi* can sound awfully alike when spoken by a duck.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thanks for the tip, Amigo

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Bill I have been reading your duck poem s but didn't know how to review or react to them but this one tickled my fancy it's quite catchy. Nicely done in ABCB rhyme scheme. Everyone has an angle or fetish. obviously ducks are yours lol

thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

I've also done ten of the following world's: horses, flies, spiders, octopi, sloth, moles, and caterpillars.

reply by DR DIP on 17-Oct-2017

oh I didn't know that. You have a menagerie of animals! lol fun writes