Comment from nomi338

Excellent

I guess that not all caterpillars turn into butterflies. Some have the capacity to turn neighborhoods topsy turvy. Some have the ability to upend, destroy and reconfigure structures and lives, especially if they are out of control.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Cat makes it flat

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

haha the very hungry caterpillar ate it. The picture is perfect book 'The Very Hungry Caterpillar'? I like the 'n' alliteration. [Do you know the book?]

Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thanks, Jan. I watched the video, The Very Hungry Caterpillar, based on Eric Carle's book, just now. I see the correlation. Thanks.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

And a very large "caterpillar" it was! Through such a brevity of words, there is a great building of sad and nostalgic mood here by pointing to where the house "once stood" and that the attic is below ground level and the alliterative "nowhere neighborhood."

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017

Thanks, lyenochka, for a great review. Bill

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Oh, THAT caterpillar. Very imaginative.

I'm afraid we see too many of that kind these days. So sad that critters homes are being destroyed.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017

Thanks, da, for taking a look at this. Bill

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

They say you just can't stop progress Bill I see knock downs and developments on gracious old homes with great memories everyday but sadly the lure of the developers dollar entices many. Thanks for sharing
great little write and so true

dip

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017

Thanks, Doc, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

Haha well done Bill!
Excellent dual operation of the Caterpillar here and a delightful little rhyme proving that they can move earth of epic proportions when armed and legged with hydrolics.

I think you better cancel your Neighborhood Watch membership. Not sure you'll be needing it now you are living in your car haha

A fun write!
Cheers P

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017

Thanks, P

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Now that is a big caterpillar! You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words and the art work. Blessings, teri

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2017

Thanks, Teri

reply by Teri7 on 30-Sep-2017

you are so welcome!