Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Now this is another crazy fly poem you have penned. I try to shoo these things out if they enter into the house. They are quit nasty! Very cute wording! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahaha, for a moment I thought you were berating my cats, Bill, but I forgive you. You didn't, really. Just needed it for the rhyming, right? Hmmm, never mind, I'll let it pass. Lol. Great poem. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017

Thank you, Ulla. I have a love / hate relationship with cats.

reply by Ulla on 11-Aug-2017

Ha, so I was right. LOL:)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written fun poem about the fly Nx its unwelcome presence. As soon as I start to cook, they appear in swarms. The only good fly is a dead fly.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017

Thanks, Sandra

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Oh yes my friend this is well written wonderful rhyming and the closing made me smile I love the picture you have chosen to enhance the poem works really well , done again regards Jill

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017

Thanks you, MHP, for the nice review. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

As old Adolph might say nein, nein! flies, flies, I do despise. They are a sore sight to my eyes. Do not allow them to pollute the skies. My decree is that every fly dies.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017

Tod zum Fliegen (Death to flies)

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Flies are my pet peeve! I hate them! What use are they apart from spreading disease? None. I do wonder if they are the vilest criminals that the devil has sent back to annoy us all! This is so funny, would be more so if it wasn't so true. I did enjoy the end rhyme of all the stanzas which was beautifully followed up with some very lyrical last line rhyme. LOL. Had you worked out the final word before you wrote the other three? Well done, it was a fun read. :) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017

Thanks, Sandra, for the kind review.

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Bill, this one made me laugh, it's 5.50am here in the U.K. and you've given me a smile I don't think will be out done for the rest of the day.
Absolutely wonderful
Mitchell

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017

Thanks, Y, for the upbeat revie. Bill

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hey, don't be so hard on yourself, buddy. Shat, crap, sh!t...it's all very chic these days, especially in literature.
Hell, it's all the rage!
Take television too. How many reality shows are popular, like Duck Dynasty, or The Bachelor, for instance?
Now, that is shat! But everybody seems to be watching it.
So, cheer up.
I'm sure you're poem will do fine.
By the way...what's that gawd awful stench? Heh-heh-heh...

~Dean

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017

Thanks, Dean. It smells better already.

reply by Dean Kuch on 09-Aug-2017

See?
Told ya; you'll be just flyine...e-r-r-r fine.

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem "Fly World 9".. You rhymed it well except in stanza two line three., You may wish to review this.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017

It's slant rhyme. Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Bill, your fly poems are always quite amusing. I've learned so much about flies after reading your poems. That last line is hilarious.

I am interested in your next insect series. Perhaps butterflies?

Enjoy the remainder of your week.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017

Thanks, PF, for the nice review. Bill

reply by Poetic Friend on 09-Aug-2017

I am awaiting your butterflies series. Please, please, please. I love butterflies.