Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

And I'm thinking a 'scratch' might just be a problem with this one!! :) ;) And hooray for sloths - of course, my favoritist sloth in the world works at the DMV in the movie 'Zootopia'... lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 19-May-2020

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reply by the author on 19-May-2020

Every shot is a trick shot.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Wow...those nails!! Sloth's used to just absolutely fascinate me when I was a child. Their big dark eyes.....and those nails!! Love your little pool-poem, blessings...

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017

Thanks, IR, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, Another great 5-7-5 about the sloth. So true, just don't let him rack. Love it. I wonder how many more you're going write about the sloth.
All the best. Ulla:))
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 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017

My limit is 10

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Sure, why not? I've got a couple years I can waste. They say that a mind is a terrible thing to waste, and I say that a waist is a terrible thing to mind. A sloth loves to take his time and does not mind expanding his waistline.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thanks, nomi,

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Some time? I can only imagine how long it would take a sloth to line up their shot. Oh my! You know how some people stand there and run the cue through their fingers several times before releasing the stick. Picturing the sloth at the edge of the table makes me cringe,

Well told,

~patty~

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thanks, Patty

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Oh Bill these are so funny. I love the punch line "Just don't let him rack!" Clever writing. Are you going to publish a book of these? Sure would make a grand picture book. Sloths can be so full of characterization! Well written. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thanks, Kiwi

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

lol This made me giggle as I read this 5-7-5 about the sloth and pool. You used very good and cute wording and very good imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a very clever 5/7/5 Bill, just love it's very clever,
not so subtle theme,
I actually know some two legged sloths
this would genuinely apply to,
in my sphere of influence,
well done, an excellent post my friend, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks, Roy

reply by royowen on 25-Jul-2017

Most welcome

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a good advice about playing some nine-ball with a sloth, do, discover, enjoy their play have joy over only if you let him not rack; I liked.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks, ALD

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Let him rack
Or he will attack
And claw the Hell
Out of your back.
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Very good imagery

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks, Charlie