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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Are you sure 'nine' is the right number here...?!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (The spider in the picture has nine legs.)
Comment from Spitfire
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Ha,ha. That could get very expensive, but also fun considering the new designer nails and choice of shoes available. Nice alliteration with nine, need, and nails.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
    Thanks, Shari, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from BOO ghost
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That creeps BOO out before he goes to sleep. Ha ha! Loaded with humor. There are pros and cons of everything. A real dandy of a poem and picture. Count your doubloon and your legs. This is BOO-terrific!

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
    Thanks, BOO, missing sleep for this. Bill
Comment from Teri7
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O.K. Now this is too funny and cute. I never looked at a spider that way and probably never will until now! lol You used very good and cute wording and a great picture of the spider! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
    PThanks, Teri



reply by Teri7 on 07-Jul-2017
    you are so welcome!
Comment from nomi338
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That should not be a problem for this clever fellow. Hell just spin your self a fine set of Stetsons, Stacy Adams or even Buster Browns. Moccasins any one?

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017

    Thanks, nomi
Comment from BeasPeas
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LOL! So true. Nails done and shoe stores could rack up a fortune--but, as they say--it is what it is. On the other hand, they don't have to pay for housing so it's a trade off. An enjoyable 5-7-5. Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017

    Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from damommy
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Hahahahahahaha! Just what I needed. I love seeing your poems come up. So refreshing amidst all this sadness.

I never thought about them having their nails done. Funny, funny, funny.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
    Thanks, da.
Comment from frogbook
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Well that picture just made my skin crawl. Yucci, great and imaginative situations conjured up in the Bill and spider connection.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
    Thanks, FB.
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Bill, I must admit, I can't look at the artwork. It is so creepy.

However, I did enjoy your humor in this poem -- the nail technician will freak out, indeed.

Great usage of word economy. You made every word count

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
    Thanks, PF.
Comment from jaded831
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Ha, ha, I enjoyed your poem. It made me laugh, it is always good to start the day on a positive note. Great syllable count, reads smooth, and has comic tone. Everything together gets a thumbs up from me. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
    Thanks, jaded, for the positive review. Bill