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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Gonna talk that ear right off... even before Sassafras' race!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
Gonna talk that ear right off... even before Sassafras' race!! ;) I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look. (Insider trading almost.)
Comment from Gloria ....
Haaaa, too funny. Wouldn't it be cool if horses could whisper the winners in the races though?
Cut photo and a most fun read in your book, Bill. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
Haaaa, too funny. Wouldn't it be cool if horses could whisper the winners in the races though?
Cut photo and a most fun read in your book, Bill. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thanks again, Gloria.
Comment from nomi338
Man, talk about chewing the fat, chewing a persons ear off, or even think about filling a person'es ear with horse plucky. If you would listen to advice of a horse who is not running in the race you are betting on means, that you are a sucker, Take that horse instead somewhere, establish ownership and make a million bucks over a horse that really talks.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
Man, talk about chewing the fat, chewing a persons ear off, or even think about filling a person'es ear with horse plucky. If you would listen to advice of a horse who is not running in the race you are betting on means, that you are a sucker, Take that horse instead somewhere, establish ownership and make a million bucks over a horse that really talks.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Thanks, nomi, for reviewing this. Bill
Comment from Ulla
Hahahah, you had me laughing out loud here. Wonderful, 5-7-5 and the picture is a hoot. I don;t know where you get it from, but I hurrying on to the next one. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
Hahahah, you had me laughing out loud here. Wonderful, 5-7-5 and the picture is a hoot. I don;t know where you get it from, but I hurrying on to the next one. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Ulla.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Bill. This is an amusing image and you have done it justice with your 5-7-5 to match. It does look like the horse is whispering in the guy's ear. Whatever it is-the guy looks happy to hear it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
Hi Bill. This is an amusing image and you have done it justice with your 5-7-5 to match. It does look like the horse is whispering in the guy's ear. Whatever it is-the guy looks happy to hear it. Marilyn
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Looking at several shots of thus pose, the horse is actually trying to bite his ear and eventually does.
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Oops, that's not a good thing. Horses are gorgeous, but they can be a little attitudinal.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. I really like these about the horses. You used very cute descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned. I really like these about the horses. You used very cute descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from BOO ghost
Hahahahahhahhahahahhahahahaha! Now, that is funny. that makes logical horse sense. BOO will wait until third race. yeah, this one is my favorite by far... keep it up, BOO-tastic!!!!!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
Hahahahahhahhahahahhahahahaha! Now, that is funny. that makes logical horse sense. BOO will wait until third race. yeah, this one is my favorite by far... keep it up, BOO-tastic!!!!!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Thanks, BOO, for the upbeat review. Bill
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okie dokie.
Comment from frogbook
Haha. You are out doing yourself on these dear horse stories. Very funny and sweet. Are u putting these in a book? Would be a great one. Very fun and entertaining.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
Haha. You are out doing yourself on these dear horse stories. Very funny and sweet. Are u putting these in a book? Would be a great one. Very fun and entertaining.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thanks, FB.
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Thanks, FB.
Comment from damommy
Hahahaha. It does look like he's talking to the man.
Priceless. What a clever idea.
I don't know how you come up with these things. 8-)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
Hahahaha. It does look like he's talking to the man.
Priceless. What a clever idea.
I don't know how you come up with these things. 8-)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thanks, da.
Comment from Mistydawn
When I saw the horse whispering in the man's ear, Mr. Ed came to mind. I loved that talking horse. Anyhow, the poem fits perfectly to the art and the image in my mind. Great humorous poem. Thanks for bringing back a childhood memory.
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
When I saw the horse whispering in the man's ear, Mr. Ed came to mind. I loved that talking horse. Anyhow, the poem fits perfectly to the art and the image in my mind. Great humorous poem. Thanks for bringing back a childhood memory.
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Misty, for the positive review. Bill