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Viewing comments for Chapter 332 "Dreams"
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great contest entry for the nove otto. Good job on its style. Your lines flow smoothly, there is great rhyme, & the message is clear. Dreams are a part of who we are. Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 22-May-2017

reply by the author on 22-May-2017
    That's a fine review and stars, thank you very much Jan
Comment from jusylee72
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Dreams are elusive and insightful when we stop to listen to them. They also help create memories in our brains. Many mental illnesses have been connected to the lack of deep, dreaming.

 Comment Written 22-May-2017

reply by the author on 22-May-2017
    That's interesting - like which mental ones? Thanks so much for reviewing
    Happy Monday!
Comment from oliver818
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I like your poem. It is short but powerful, I especially enjoyed the last lines about the night and day. You also used the work elusive to great effect. Thanks for sharing and have a great day

 Comment Written 22-May-2017

reply by the author on 22-May-2017
    Hi Oliver thanks very much for a positive review
    Happy Monday!
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

You know this is coming up in the prose section rather the poetry section?

I like this piece and you've given a good commentary with the poem on the nature of dreams.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 20-May-2017

reply by the author on 20-May-2017
    I don't know what you mean ! Please elaborate
reply by giraffmang on 20-May-2017
    It's on the fiction category and it should be under poetry
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
    Thanks, you actually 'made' me see my rhyme was inadequate. Hopefully, I fixed it, but where do I find the listing for it? Thanks again
reply by giraffmang on 20-May-2017
    When you scroll down past where you place the post, there should be a small box for type/category. Change to poetry there.
Comment from Kerry Foley
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I love your Nove Otto poem on dreams, I am a very lucid dreamer and enjoyed this write, good luck to you. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 19-May-2017

reply by the author on 19-May-2017
    Thank you so much for reviewing and kind rating. I'm glad you enjoyed my first attempt at that style
reply by Kerry Foley on 19-May-2017
    Your welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This Nove Otto Poem promotes an idea of dreaming and aftermath of dreams in life; and highlights the specificity of dream feeling and fantasy and passing a stand of dream in reality; I liked.

 Comment Written 19-May-2017

reply by the author on 19-May-2017
    Thank you! I appreciate your review and stars very much
Comment from Mustang Patty
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thank you for sharing your Nove Otto for the contest. Within the lines of your poem, you have described the way dreams effect our lives. They mimic the days' events and leave us gasping for air. Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~

 Comment Written 19-May-2017

reply by the author on 19-May-2017
    Hi, patty.,it's said that it's a way of dealing with everything that happens. I'm glad you enjoyed reading. Thanks for your kind wishes, reviewing and stars